when you step your foot on the thin film of the sheet,
there is a red lampshade, moist and speaking mute voices.
you take a right turn then and you see a pill of god.
you slurp it backward, at the tip of your tongue,
thinking it shall slip softly down in your stomach,
hushing the coiled noises.
you always step backwards,
at night, like dirt, dust.
a morphed arm,
for you were a burden throughout the day
and you sulked too backwards,
life eating the humans.
prayers, chants
my lips curled, bitten like half-lit moon
speaking up things bizarre, backwards,
into the sky that spreads between my white legs.
i finish reading, walking all in a backward motion.
often i survive in this perfection.
i rub my hands, to circulate a thread of warmth onto my cheeks.
i live like that. Backwards.
Great read, D! I enjoyed the repetitive “s” sounds throughout the first section as it gave off a more… sinister feel? At the very least, it amplified it and I loved how it read. Particularly loved this line: “life eating the humans” WOW! Love the opportunity to read you!! ~K 🖤
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Actually, it speaks only about us moving backwards like a replay, recap.. something that kinda. My mind produces weird things.
Thank you for reading me still.❤️
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Oh I got that part… I suppose I should I stated that I like the sound because I suppose it reminded me of a record scratch? My word choices have been poor recently so forgive me that. I loved today’s! 😄
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“I live like that. Backwards.”
You are incredible. Do you know that? ❤
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This line is so haunting I feel.
Thank you for that beautiful thing.❤️
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Beautiful is the word 👌
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Thank you
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This is really good! It makes you slow down and see what nuggets lay within… Very cool!
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I am glad you see it that way. Thank you
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You’re so inspirational in the way you write, MVS, so relevant, haunting and beautiful. Ever in awe. ❤
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You flatter me.❤️
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A very forward looking backward.
Amazing skill with words MVS
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The surreal retreat into the pain to find a safe haven is exquisitely portrayed din this poem. Well done my dear poetess. Always a pleasure to read your words.
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What can I ever assert about a piece that is not only enthralling to read,but the world you’ve given the reader’s through your poetry is incomparable.
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Jeez! You are such a religious reader. I am grateful to you.
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Beautiful🌹💞🌹keep blogging dear🍀🍀🍀
Awesome poetry♥️♥️♥️
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Somehow it reminded me of Alice in Wonderland. A very different wonderland but still… Maybe it was the pill and then doing things ‘backwards’ — I really liked the repetition.
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Hey, thank you so much.
And I like your interpretation of this poem. It’s actually intriguing.
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I am glad you liked it!
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‘you see a pill of god’ – I can move ahead from this.💙
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❤️❤️
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We write forwards on the sheets of paper but oft\ times our words are taking us backwards. I so get this. Beautiful, as usual.
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That’s a beautiful take! Thank you for reading.
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Am glad you think so. I actually imagined you stepping your pen on a white sheet, then turning the hand right to write the past, taking yourself backwards. Funny how the mind works when we read things. You are kindly welcome.
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Wow
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Thank you
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Your welcome
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Very nice
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Thank you.
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Your welcome
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i can definitely sip a nice scotch while reading this… xo
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Please, I will be honored.
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ah, the honor is all mine…
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What the fuck!
really!
The way you use your word…
are equivalent to how musicians hit that right tune when the band is together…
Amazing!
my last words!👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌
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I am reading your words and I am appreciating your words. Thank you so very much. I am actually speechless. Damn!!
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Well you get back what you put out. 👍and thinks for reading my garbage.😂😂😂✌
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