Darling,
a bumblebee of your name comes
and sticks to my comatose body
strewing words of your lips,
porcelain slick drops of rain.
There I am, endlessly counting
the threads of time,
your body like chemicals rushing,
talking tounges, flesh sinking in nature.
something surreal we deliver to autumn,
a painted silhouette of love.
We gulp the harrowing throb of time,
inhaling the movements of our doused body,
in a swamp of emblematic sheets of symmetry.
We become a pattern, a floral one,
darling...
this is how i take you,
Afternoon red sun.
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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Gorgeous piece!! Very whimsical and dreamy and full of beautiful prose. Your talent is endless. Thanks for the share, beautiful soul, and I hope all has been well for you! 😊💜
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Aww, how you always make me happy. Thank you.❤️
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So enthralling ❤❤❤.
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Thank you Sulaiman.
Hope you are well.
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Yes, please! This is exquisite, Devika!
“We become a pattern, a floral one, darling… this is how i take you, Afternoon red sun.”
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I feel you are the only one reading me. Lol.❤️❤️
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Oh, no, ma’am! You know that cannot be.
*big hugs*
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❤️❤️❤️
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I will tell you this: you make it quite easy to read you. Don’t stop sharing.
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Very nice!!
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Nice to hear from you after so long
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Thank you, and keep doing what you do my fellow poet
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🙏🙏
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🙂
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Nice article you got here
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Thanks 🙏
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A unique feel while reading it. 😍
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🙏🙏
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I love the imagery in this! This poem oozes wonderful emotion!!
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Thank you Braeden!
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My pleasure
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Just so beautiful!! Truly!
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The ending left me mesmerized!❤️
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That makes me happy ❤️
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beautiful writing!
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Breathtakingly beautiful!
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Oh wow! Thanks my dearest
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Yes that last stanza, lifts me a little with it’s artistic oomph…and rocks my world!
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Hi Diana! Thank a lot for this.
Appreciate your words always
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Always a delight to read you Talented Soul! 🌹💖
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Lovely 🌷
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Beautifully written! ❤️
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Humbled
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When you write about love, Devika in your beautiful metaphor I can’t stop smiling while reading it.How beautiful would be that person who writes so beautifully about love…so honored to know you.
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Thank you Megha, I am sure you look beautiful that way!
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You use words and metaphor like fine honed tools that you can manipulate as you see fit. Again, I am captured by the way you do romance.
These are the most gorgeous words I have read since I returned…
We become a pattern, a floral one,
darling…
this is how i take you,
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Beautifully penned mate ✔️💯
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Thank you Nirant.
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Pleasure always for beautiful stuff
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Please give me your email so that we can talk? Please?
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I am afraid to do so. I can’t.
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The way I said is a polite manner of saying a no.
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Very luscious lovely flow of poem! Enjoyed it! Keep blogging my friend 💐 Have a lovely morning ☕
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