
Piquant Ray’s
swallowing another vein
outstripping a colour.
A semblance of mouths happen
with a tripping thrust of tongue,
A man dies and another blooms,
eating a piece of time.
syncopated sheets bleeding,
like ruckus of seizures,
does everything lick time?
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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Another amazing poem Devika. It feels a bit different to your others, but it has the same bite. Really good
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Thank you.❤️❤️
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A dark surrealism of beauty and your language is my favorite and I’m blessed to be reading you. 🙂
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Damn! Thank you.
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You are welcome. 🙂
Seriously, your work is phenomenal and brilliantly gold. 🙂
P.S I posted something new yesterday.
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Does everything lick time .. I like this !! excellent 👍
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🙏🙏
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Nice peace Valiant !
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Thank you.
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Only you can produce such stunning beauties MVS. I am happy to see and read your valuable posts
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What a beautiful poem. In short verse you told a story❤️
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Oh…. “a man dies and another blooms ..eating a piece of time” … tragically beautiful. It’s time to live ❤
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Your always fascinating thoughts!
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What a way to say time eats time.Love this.
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Beautiful write-up!
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Outstanding poem👌
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❤️❤️
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My pleasure😄
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Just discovered this blog…your writing and word choice is so unexpected but beautiful. I especially loved the last line!
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Thoughtful poem, excellent poetic beauty, cheers🌷❤️🌷
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