flux the cactus outwards
stretching from your comatose body of air
Inwards and upwards, the abnormalities
with twigs of mahogany bleeding between your legs,
let it out, screeching your skull
till the brim splits and an adroit sleek barrier exist,
Your body, a stoic compressor
of thoughts and sighs
with longitudinal horizons.
Plain and sober.
Breathe and emancipate like a child with doll skin.
You will enter a circle, beneath your fingernails then,
a point of reverberation. Gulp the blank dot of this life.
Those last three lines were perfection. Bravo MVS.
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Thank you Andrew.
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Such intensity. I kept reading and getting deep into it. I’m totally amazed by it’s excellence! 😊
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Thank you love.❤️
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The title itself is❤️
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❤️❤️
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Goddammit! I love this so much!
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Thank you lovely ❤️
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HOW-DO-YOU-DO-IT? I am so amazed every single time at your poetry 🙂
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Means a lot.❤️
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Beautiful and quite satisfying from my favourite. I love seeing and reading your posts. As a lone admirer 🌻
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Wow 😮👏🏽👏🏽
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Thanks!
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This aches while it pushes against the boundaries. I love the line: “Your body, a stoic compressor/ of thoughts and sighs.” Beautiful.
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Thankyou for such beautiful words.
Appreciate it a lot.
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Exceptional, MVS. 💗
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Thanks!!
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You’re Welcome MVS.
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This is wonderful.
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Thank you.
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Excellent ! And thought provoking 👍
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Thank you.
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Devika, this is extraordinary! A beautiful arrangement of words!!!
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Wow, incredible. What a beautiful ending! Thank you. 🙂 Blessings, Debbie
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Thank you ❤️
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Amazingly written.
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So nice to hear your thoughts.
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One of the strangest poems you’ve ever composed.
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Strangest?
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