My motif heart breaks
like a pool of ugliness,
Last night’s love, now a vintage memory
how you mock my love, irritates me.
i revolve like an Earth,
sticking to the mollusc
and petunias
and i fall.
fall like a group of galaxy
wild animals biting my skin
and I see you nowhere.
Nowhere inside me.
Nowhere uplifting my heavy stoned-arm.
You put me on bed
like an Old Wine to taste
till it drips and bursts.
Torrential streams of rivers of insanity.
I weep like a duck.
I weep like a drunk night.
(Soothing itself with its own light)
I weep and break.
You may ask the perforated sky
with drops of atoms
ripped apart from my chest
like the plunged rose, or honey-nectar.
A void in the sun.
A void in the star. Barren faces of slick dust.
And you will see where you left me.
Empty Spaces.
Brilliant.
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Thank you Y.🌻
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🌺🙏🏼
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Beautiful, so full of emotion and gripping! Thank you for sharing
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I am humbled to read your words.
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Captivating and such control with your images and word choices. 🌸♥️
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Yiee❤️❤️
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“the perforated sky.” Great phrase. I can see it.
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Thank you Lorri
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Ag! I LOVE being called Lorri. It is my nickname to my clise friends and my husband. You can always call me that. Hugs xo
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See, I knew it.😊❤️
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You DID, my lovely. Hearts to youi
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I think you detect the best accompanying images. For this piece, these lines jumped out at me:
“how you mock my love, irritates me.
i revolve like an Earth,
sticking to the mollusc
and petunias
and i fall.
fall like a group of galaxy
wild animals biting my skin
and I see you nowhere.”
Devika, you have a gift. I’m glad you continue to share it.
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And my lovely friend gives her beautiful insight. Ah, thank you Tre.
You know how to compliment a person well.❤️
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You’re most welcome. 😊
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*select the best accompanying images
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So so deeply gripping and exquisitely beautiful!!
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I am always at a joy to hear your words.
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So beautifully written. I love it ❤
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Heady and intoxicating and filled with violets.
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Thank you Allie.❤️
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Wonderfully written masterpiece
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Reblogged this on Alan's Anarchy: Daily Prompts.
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A poignant and painful disposition of the broken heart and the pain it carries after it has been used and discarded. You talk about the empty spaces, the void that loneliness leaves behind. That emptiness feels like a void in the sun and the star. It is hard to pick my fav line from this one.The second para is my fav and this whole poem is one of the best I have read from you lately.
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Profoundly penned with a poignant effect! Love this 😍
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Thank you, beautiful.
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You had me in the very first line Devika, how heartbreak is compared to patterns turning ugly and the reference of mollusc and animals biting skin describes the pain of rotting in forgotten love. Fall like group of galaxies- the pain can be felt and it’s way more deep than these words.
‘perforated sky’ – a phrase to adore. The way you talked about emptiness and the voids people leave is breathtakingly amazing. The darkness is so beautifully decorated with metaphors here.❤️
(The emotions hidden behind makes me sad, I hope you are doing well D. Hugs!)
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I am sorry again as you feel this emptiness, though I am glad I have someone to resonate to. You gave my words another levy of charm, I feel.
Thank you so much for such love!
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Some emotions never leave us. They are part of us or better they are somewhere us.❤️
Hugs! All will be well soon.
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Last night’s love, now a vintage memory: very true, very often!
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Thank you. I so appreciate your words
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Decadence…. 🤗🤗🤗
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❤️❤️
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Reading your work is like multiple mind talking about the same thing but through different metaphors it is like drifting into an ocean of uncertainties but afloat
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What a great thing to say.
Thank you Shantanu. Hope you know that ocean well .
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Who could consume any wilderness well, for I am in love with the abyss and the ravine
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Ah that. So well.
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😊🌸
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Very beautifully written and inspiring !
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🙏🙏
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Perfection!
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❤️❤️❤️
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Seems like you are back to your true self, posting outstanding pieces of poetry 💗
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Hope so.
Thank you Rulla.🌸
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You’re very welcome hun!
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Cool! You should check out my article on the physics of Black Holes:https://therealsciblog.wordpress.com/2018/06/20/black-holes/
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