i have swallowed the stars
in my tropical mouths of nostalgia,
coping the insanity, wireless tracks
with sweat and ink
ink and tears.
a blush of my cheeks
and seizure occurs
between our wild sheets
our vermilion warmth.
i sniff the old papers
to give me paper cuts,
threading a crisp jawline
point of felicity
& elision of this
moon dust heart,
i walk spherical
fetching your wet lips
wet mouth and language of Gods
i pronounce you my dalliance
& my nails clutter
in your toxin scent.
©MVS
#NaPoWriMo- 22
Beautifully written!!
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Hey Floral.Thank you sweetie.
You know, I love you.
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Delicious writing and construction, Valiant! Love this
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I am honored, thank you.
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😊😎
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Thank you for your words.🌸🌸
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Of course. 😊💛💙💜
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Love this!!
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Thank you Tina
Much love.
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wow! Amazing!
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Hey thank you Penny.
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Very strong opening. Good one MVS
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Thank you, Andrew.
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Well, here my poetess writes again about love and its beauty.and you ask how much more beautiful it can get?
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Cluttering of nails, walking spherically, paper cuts being threaded, swallowing stars, coping with everything dear to you, blush and seizures!! Woww, such vivid imagination and then this brilliant exposition of your abstract writing!! This is the language of God, the language of your valiant soul!!
Mesmerizing!!❤️❤️❤️👏👏👏
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The queen of verses , Devika !👏🏻🌈💖 best one I read today ! Thank you for this fabulous write.
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I am happy and jumping now.
Thank you Y.❤️❤️❤️
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Most welcome my dear 🙂🤗
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You’ve done it again…
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Thank you.
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Whoa, beautifully put.
How do you come about these poems? It feels like you write it with so easy, while I struggle to put one sentence down properly without grammatical mistakes or typos. -_-
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This was actually spontaneous.
Thank you though for such a beautiful remark.
I am all smiles.
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Spontaneous.
So, you are saying this come naturally to you.
That’s more awesome.
Keep writing, naturally. 😊
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Haha. Thank you.
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Good poem .. bursting of emotions 👏
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Thank you
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So vibrant! I love how you’ve used so many different senses, from the synaesthesia of ‘vermilion warmth’ to ‘wet’. x
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You know it so well, all my depictions.
Thank you!
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This is stunning and how lucky your other half is to be on the receiving end of such stupendous poetry. I love your use of language but the word elision is formidable here because not only does it fit the image you create but your writing in general – I’ve never seen anyone blend abstract thoughts and images together like you do. They are always seamless and a pure joy to read. I must admit that each time I read one of your pieces, I am back in some college poetry class and the professor has just asked us to analyse the poem. Bravo!
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Wow! I am touched actually to read this beautiful comment of yours. I take it as a big compliment, if it makes you feel that way.
Thank you for this sweet review.
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It was my pleasure to comment on such beautiful poetry. You are kindly welcome!
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Reblogged this on Lilaia Moreli – Words Are Sacred.
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Thanks!
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Kudos to my favourite blogger
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Amazing & beautiful like always!📝👌☺
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❤️🙏
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You’re really good at romantic and body poetry. Your imagery/metaphor is top notch. I hope you know that.
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Hey, thank you so much.
I know it now.🌸
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The most beautiful thing I’ve read today!
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Aww🙏
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Amazing as always! Love reading your writing!
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Girl you.❤️❤️❤️❤️
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❤️❤️❤️
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Reblogged this on A Global Divergent Literary Collective and commented:
Devika Mathur
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Thank you, Kindra.
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What can I say? You are amazing!
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Aww. Thanks.🌸
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