poetry

The art

your slurpy mouth holds magic
 to sediment a stoic seed
 of silence, like silence.
 calm shades governing,
 a tip-toed saliva of blank eyes,
 a life kissing a life.

behind your earlobe,
 the sky falls,
 in tunes of carbon
 thick slices of carbon.
 coal romances with fire,
 life exists everwhere.

©MVS

27 thoughts on “The art

      1. It’s my pleasure! I really love your writing. Not just the flow but the complex nature of your use of language. You describe things differently and that makes you unique. It’s the kind of writing I really love!

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  1. “your slurpy mouth holds magic
    to sediment a stoic seed
    of silence, like silence.”….devika..💘💘💘 you killed it..how can you write such a brilliant lines..the first lines explaining about how one sediment the pain itself is marvellous..and in the in the end of that you wrote LIKE SILENCE..I am awestruck really..I am not even exaggerating devika mathur…what a brilliance .this is one of the best line so far I have read from your posts..💝💝💝…” tip-toed saliva of blank eyes,
    a life kissing a life” this is one off the beautiful imagery Again…tip- toed saliva of blank..I just want to know how you go into those depths sands form those imaginations..and life kissing life..is again good line..and next paragraphs..you wrote how sexy falls behind ear lobe in forms of carbon..why have you used carbon..I am actually thinking deep..but I could get it..but I really love the way the way you linked it to carbon..but I have to understand in depth…anyways..unlike your long poems…which anyway attract me like honeybee to flowers..this being very short have really made me spellbound..

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