I tried closing my pale eyes, like a water-chestnut dipped in currents and oceans
to put some relief on my maniacal themes, running like a sleep- walker. I converge, and dilate like music of light to imbue the monotonous sickening truth of your eyes. The sickening and sickening and sickening spit of your mouth.
I know it’s your zig-zag thousands salts of despondency, blur like a haze or an abstruse hook of pills and lies. Is it too bad for you? Or you want to dissect my ribcage, with a shovel of time. Spandex face, your smile a myth. I want you to change the sheets of my bed, change its theme and its moist forlorn tales. Could your reverse the pills and dig a choir of bursting waves of illusions & smear the sunken hope on my lips of mirror? They might crackle, if you run. They might become a figment of silver sound, lost yet found. Could you reach me out?
Like oil- dyed bodies collapsing and wondering. Like valleys & wine sticking to the mountains. Could you see it?
Β©MVS
NaPoWriMO#28
amazing
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Thank you Pankaj.
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Amazing π wild & vivid imagination π
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This is beautifully penned, as always. π
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I think it’s just bad.
But thank you.
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Are you kidding me?
It.Is.Not!
It is well penned, the emotion I mean!
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ππ
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Devika, let me put it this way. I will concentrate on learning by reading your posts. Thank you for being there ππ
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To be honest, at times even the writer is unaware of her mind.
But then again, thank you really!
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Thatβs so sweet of you to say.
Let me say this again, I am just fortunate to follow you and your precious writing. That itself makes me immensely happy π
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Oh..I am all numb now.
This high praise. Damn!π
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I am not going to back away, as i do mean it and more so now π
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Please make yourself comfortable with my words.π
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Yes, sure I will π
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I could see it. Lol
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Great poetic prose!
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Humbled.
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My pleasure!
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