Your belligerent electric eyes
of swamps and tea bags
like vapours & death
picking my hair strands
to dissect me further,
oh you, mouth of monster
& shadow of half-naked moon.
i lie on my bed & count my reverse
motionless screams, words, screams
here in this room of death & poetry.
chapters of skin peeling, numb iris,
transparent lips of missing skies
i forlorn my ankles
of you and me.
and shiver the scoundrel body.
for this body is a madhouse.
like a concave arm of wax
dripping insanity, clocks
bells and words crooked-pungent.
©MVS-words
#NaPoWriMo-20
Bloody brilliant piece!!!
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I already love what you write and now I am humbled.
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Thanks a lot.. Love your writings too. They’re amazing!!
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Thanks a bunch!
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Fantastic!
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How kind, thank you!
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Superb passion!
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Truly honored.🌸🌸
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Wow! Amazing!!
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❤️❤️
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Such a cacophony of brilliance! I LOVED THIS!!! WELL DONE!!
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Your words make me smile.
Thank you.
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for this body is a madhouse. <——- My favorite lines.
like a concave arm of wax
dripping insanity,
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Thank you, Andrew.
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Concoction of brilliance with spices of insanity. Loved it Dii :).
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You have always been a kind support.
Thank you Siddharth.
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Always
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You make me wanna write something like this. 🙂
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Try it out. You might fall in love with such writings. 🙏
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I am already in love. 🙂
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Love this
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Thank you
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Insanity never sounded this beautiful.❤️ Sheer excellence.😊
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Oh thank you Sameera!
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Words coming through the tunnels. Beautiful. 👍
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He, thank you brother.
Dark is beautiful.
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Yeah absolutely.
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I am always lost when I read one of your pieces.
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Aww, you are a darling dear M.
Thank you.
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‘for this body is a madhouse’ ‘chapters of skin’ – how do you find so many beautiful ways to express your thoughts? I hope that you never run dry.
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Aww.
Thank you.❤️❤️
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💞
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Your writing stops my breath.. temporarily thankfully. I’d love your thoughts on my poetry as well, if you ever have the chance. Thanks
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Sure.
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“picking my hair strands
to dissect me further,” this is so so so deep. ❤ ❤ also loved the way you put this one "transparent lips of missing skies"
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Thank you so much for bestowing me with such love. I am forever grateful.
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You truly deserve it all!🌸🌿🌹💝❤💜💚💙💛
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