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Between your dewy lips and wet time
 I see clocks of white hills
 humming skins, throbbing breaths
 pure, symmetrical breaths.

Inside the tempestuous wilderness
 of your eyelids and thumbnail
 A reflection of paradise exists.

Once again, the frozen earth erupts now
 holding chills, heat and rains all inside
 sulking the primordial fights
 and blossoming tiny weeds of hope.

In the moisture of inks and skies
 Indexation of our inundated words occur
 Hysteria, Incantations, Contentment

โ„ขMy Valiant Soul
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my valiant soul

A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times. Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied. My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others. Curator of Olive Skins.

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  1. ok let me explain what I saw,it’s like men and women making out,in first para it’s like both hearts are beating at same pace as they take symmetric breaths, and I consider paradise as body of individual between eyelids and thumb nails,and in third paragraph I feel like woman is Hurst badly in oast,with that eternal love new hope of life has entered her soul, and last paragraph about all laughs and feelings both felt.SORRY IF I SEE IT IN WRONG WAY

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  2. I just saw that as a romantic pooems also the women’s heart in romance ,where her past is getting healed through lobe showed by man.And she see new life and new beginning through him..it’s what I thought after reading

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  3. It is beautiful how you pen this, finding paradise in another’s eyes and soul. This is warm and filled with admiration and that last line, sounds like the culmination of shared love!

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  4. I absolutely adore when you write about love and its form. Its so beautiful how one single person can become the universe for another, where he finds the solace and beauty residing together.
    Beautifully written as always.Love and Hugs.

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  5. Lovely composition..it’s such a contrast to the last one I read. The various shades of Devika shimmer in the ocean of poems in this blog..a reflection of paradise indeed!

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