No, it did not start with the extraction of bones and marrow. Neither, there was an epiphany.
I pluck my eyebrow with a sharp pencil, to check the skin underneath. A bizarre.
Mockery of a round square pats my naked back, yelling I have something inside my earlobe too.
So, I prick my navel and join the rummaging polka dots meeting my ankle, eroding the black spot finally.
What is there after all beneath my transparent skin? I burn. I burn.
Enough by now, drinking, smoking indivisible moments. They inundate like ant colonies.
For I have a single eye, a single lip, a single leg, a single tornado
The rest is a stone of Poetry and a wool of Ink.
This is πππππππ
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Aww.
Thanks girl.β€οΈ
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You never fail to use the word mockery with such great beauty π
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This is the second time I guess I used it and you noticed it. Oops!
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Beautifully penned!ππ
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Thank you.
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Irony and elegance…. perfect… π€πΉ
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Thank you dear one!,β€οΈ
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You are quite the genius
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How nice of you.
Thank you kind soul.
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Oh wow. Stunning! π
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So much love to you.
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Wow…it’s faaaaaaaaaaaabulousππππ.You explained something unexplainable.And you exclaimed whether it was epiphany or not. Mockery of round square !!..round square is hypothetical..but it’s what you are saying you don’t what’s is it bothering.This was excellent line.loved a lot.O don’t know that words can also be can put in this way.A lesson for me . And you found the black spot which came by burning and burning by connecting the dots This is another excellent line,because you compared dots with the mysterious phenomenon ..happening inside,by those clues you found the spot.waaaaaaah..perfectπ.And you said about drinking and smoking,to just get out of that pain.and you told about the single thing bothering you by mentioning with single eye,lip and tornado.though tornado is single.It shatters you.Last line was classic.Stone of poetry,which says it’s hard in hear and wool off ink,generally ink is something which moves and have fluidity.But here wool can’t act as ink,similarly rock.Wow….stagnant emotions.I think something is going in your life,This is also soo dark.But you anyways won’t tell us.But I can see through the word.I must say.I enjoyed a lot.Thanks for those.A learning experience too.A real guru for meπ
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Kalyan,
This was not a dark poetry. It was all about how if you discover the skin of my skin, all you will see is words, poetry and ink.
I used some oxymorons round square also as a figurative speech only. The darkness that you perhaps see is something mysterious that a writer’s pen is saying.
It’s a fact that how he/she is made up of poetry and that is what the end line describes also.
Thank you for paying a read as always!
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Now I read again.yes you are right It’s not dark.But once read that poem in dark angle and let me know how you felt with your own words when you see from dark side.Just requesting
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I have read it.
I see no darkness.
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Oh my bad..then why I saw it…may be I am completely thinking in negative way.actually I asked you to read in dark manner.For example Imagine a woman going through lot of difficulties,And imagine she is going through lot of pain.Them imagine she wrote these lines.Now read this.If you still didn’t see it.Then I think I have to change my view on this poem
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I have told this earlier also, it’s all about perception.
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Okay..okay….May be I am still in the mood of your yesterdays two poems.
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When you dig beneath the skin and search through the marrow, this is what you find inside the poet: ink and poetry. How creative you have demonstrated this in your perfect use of figurative language and stunning imagery.
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So glad that you got underneath the skin of my poetry world. I am thankful to you.
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I always do, Devika, and I am happy to share my thoughts. You are most welcome!!
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Nice one!!
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Thank you so much..
I love your words too!
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Your welcome and I appreciate that as well from you!!
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Can I send you a hug for this, D? You’re brilliant, and all ink and poetry. π
Love always!
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So wonderful to see your beautiful face on the gravatar!π
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Aww. Thank you Maria.
You are a darling!β€οΈ
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Blissful… π π
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It’s been long since I heard from you.
Many thanks!
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Hehe…I can’t follow your works regularly…my bad…but whenever I come back it’s bloody beautiful. Your sense of words is amazing. Much appreciated here… π π
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It’s okay.
My pleasure to have you in spur of the moment only.
Thanks!
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loved this, poetry and ink that transcend existence.
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Yes, exactly!
Thank you so much.
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Poetry and ink is all we have. Thatβs all we have become.
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This poetry style is a much different content than your other work. I really, really, love what you’ve done with this sort of prose narrative cryptic wordage. π
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Your amazing poetry is a beautiful confirmation – poetry always remains. No matter what keeps getting stripped off, poetry will remain.
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Beautiful. I guess that’s the anatomy of poets. Floating endlessly in the pool of ink as blood inside the body of a poetry.
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I want to be able to write like this some day! Gorgeous writing.
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You are simply amazingβ€οΈ
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I love that first stanza. The whole poem is one that really makes the gears in my head turn and think about what it’s saying.
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Thanks, Carol.
Much appreciate your kind words.
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Youβre very welcome.
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Your creativity of choosing words and correlating them is beyond brilliance.
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Thank you so much.
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