I eat the brevity of moments
piece by piece
in irregular, circular motions
like the daunts of rain
the daunts of greys
with cerulean eye- dots.
These limbs are an array of woollen mouths
fragmented and ruffled,
in the moments of despair
in the moments of sunsets.
I conjure and swallow
all that occurred here,
in these moments of pain
in these moments of abortions,
Life romancing fatal nights,
a spider knitting a bridge of paradise
it clicks and time haunts the future.
And, I eat it all…moments.
©image and words- MVS
NaPoWriMo#7
good one to express how life moves on
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Thanks!
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And the winner of “How deep you can go” award is ……….. Devika dii <3.
Brilliant :).
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Haha.
You always make me smile
Thank you so much for this honor.😊
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Always Dii 🙂
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That first stanza is pure magic!! Love this, Devika.
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Aww Angie.
This means a lot.🖤
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💜🌺
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Gripping picture.
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Ah, thanks for that. 🖤
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It was painful yet beautiful because that’s how moments in our lives are :’)
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Actually, it is surreal.
Thank you for your wise words!
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Superb
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Oh my!
Thank you.🖤
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I love this composition, the last two stanzas are the favorites as it falls in same page to my thoughts.
Like always just short of words but you keep writing sister!!😇📝👌
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I am thankful to you for always being there.
Really appreciate your words.
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You’re Welcome!
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I must say my mind is always blown everytime I am reading you, you perfectly know how to use word and add feelings to it, the passion always felt and create a masterpiece^^.
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Your love is truly visible, beautiful soul.
Thank you so much, I am really grateful!
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Loved the way you defined life. Surreal
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Thank you Shantanu.
Appreciate your words!
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My pleasure
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Oh my goodness I’m always amazed by your writing!!! Lovely piece!!!
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Floral, you are my precious one.❤️
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So vivid, and compelling. Love this!
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So many thanks.
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You could feed me your words all day ♥️ love you, Devika
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I would be more than happy to do so.❤️
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♥️♥️♥️
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I would like to invite you to a quote challenge, I hope you’ll find it interesting ! For more information visit the following link:
All the best !
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We all seeking truth in the brevity of moments but few have the skill to express like you. My fav line is “a spider knitting a bridge of paradise”.
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Megha, you have always been a sweet reader to me.
Thank you lovely.
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My pleasure Devika.I liked the new feel of your website.
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You being the first one to notice.
Feels good!
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I’m sure others must have noticed but must have for drowned in your poetry.. hahaha.
Also, you have one of the beautiful profile I have even seen ,poets can easily write poetry about you.You are a beautiful person inside and out Devika.God bless!!
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I am speechless right now. Trust me you kind soul.
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Awesome poem!
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🙏🙏
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Reblogged this on Lilaia Moreli – Words Are Sacred.
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Honored!
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The honour is all mine. I’ve encountered a very fine poetess.
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Aww
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