i know the formations
when i had your face
close to my lips.
voids went flickering
with aerospace dissolved
in the hymns of my carrot eyes
i tore up the blatant sky
that rummage your body
and your smell,
for i sleep with my eyes
dipped in your presence.
Soft balls of cotton inside
thundering my long legs
all about your hair-locks
all about your language of love.
I become vintage inside
your dewy arms and moles.
Your words, temple bells.
The whiteness of a damp canvas
augments as my pupil cries
for a slick kiss to form knots.
Knots of bond. Memoirs.
Ceremonies. Togetherness.
©MVS
Wow! Beautiful! “I become vintage inside” absolutely amazing!😍😍😍😍
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Hey you lovely soul.
Must I say you are the sweetest!😊
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Awww, My Valiant Soul. 😙😙😙😙😙
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So much love. Jeez!
Hugs!😊❤️❤️
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Loads and loads of love ❤❤❤❤❤💕💕💕💕💕💕
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💖💜👍
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❤️❤️
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❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Totally edgy and perfect!!!
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Glad to hear that, Bill!
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Beautiful.❤
‘for i sleep with my eyes
dipped in your presence.’- intensely gorgeous piece.💖💖
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Thank you Sameera.
Your words are precious.❤️❤️
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Epic last stanza; felt elevated by your sweet words of union and tender immersion ❤
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Thank you sweet Diana.
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A curtsy and mega smile to you, dear lady!
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❤️❤️❤️
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pupil cries, the line is so much emotional if you read it the 2nd time too. hats off ❤
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Thanks you Pia. You focussed on that point which is actually more than eyes crying.
Means a bunch, love.❤️
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yaa exaclty, it takes a lot of emotions to write these types of lines, not many writers can do it justice 🙂
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Now, blushing I am.😊❤️❤️
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cool, job done 😉
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I love this new streak of valiant and soulful poetry, so loving, positive and yet longing for more. The addiction to your verse gets worse 🙂
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I am dealing with a lot of stress actually and trying to soothe my bones and breath through serene dose of writing for you become what you think and write.
So let’s try that also! And thank you for believing in my work.🙏
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precisely why the valiant tag, may you overcome the stress with such beautiful verse that stress gives up trying.
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I have actually asked myself that a lot of time! But keeping a positive face MAY work.
I am relaxed also most of the times. It’s all in the stars.
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It definitely works, also I am sure the celestial stars love to shine on the earthly ones 🙂
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You know that you are kind!
Thank you.
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Haha just stating facts as always, have a nice day!
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Amazing poem and you are truly addiction with mind blowing poems
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Thank you sweet soul.
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Excuse me?
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lols i mean i am in love with your writings
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Oh, thank you.
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Beautiful. I love the sincerity in your lines. I get to understand your emotions.
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Thank you for understanding the emotions. I do appreciate your kind read.
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I look forward to more pieces of art.
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Thank you
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Wow! I loved ending lines very much . ‘I become vintage inside ‘. Soft cotton balls nd next line . Brilliant 👌💝👏
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Thank you Shyra.
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My pleasure 😊
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❤️
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youre so talented !
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Oh Kelsey.❤️❤️
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Deep poem
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Thank you MCM!
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Your welcome
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Such brilliant beautiful lines!
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😊
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😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 the first line made my heart skip a beat!!❤️❤️ I felt love , deep true love oozing out while experiencing this beautiful creation.. loved it immensely! 💕💕😍👌👌👌👏👏
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Thank you brother.
I truly enjoy your words.
Much appreciated!
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😋🤗 my pleasure 😊😊
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Great!!!!
I love you ❤💗💕
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Brilliant. Love this
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wow, this post really struck a chord with me. I decided after losing my mum to addiction it was time to finally be brave enough to write about my experience in the hopes that it raises awareness.
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Aww, darling I wish you all the happiness and most importantly the strength to absorb some normal breaths in this world.
Hugs ❤️
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Beautiful post, wonderful! Feel free to check out myvaliumstory.org, Although not on your level I hope you take something from it.
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Surely, I will read you.
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