The night knitted our bodies like lanterns lit
with navy-blue aromas,
with currents storming
with sands under my body of hope,
with utopia and songs messed up in my head.
You wrapped my raisin skin,
performed colourful themes
like an Orion singing,
poetry dancing.
The night stimulated
the thunderstorms,
with Petrichor,
dripping from my tongue
With sunflowers melting
on our wax bodies
And the texture changing,
Earthquakes happening.
I grew a day older that day,
to see your landscapes and pyramids
sulking on my lips
sulking in my eyes,
A destiny.
You bit my neck that night
and you saw your name imbued
in frames and pieces
like a soft cloth residing
under my moonlit blood
You knew that day, we shared something more
beyond the stars.
Like Spring approaching.
®MVS
Superlike!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for paying a read!
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is wonderful..loved reading it👌📝
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am glad you enjoyed it. Means a lot always!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Welcome!😇
LikeLiked by 1 person
as usual scintillating senses to the corner
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much.
I am really grateful!
LikeLiked by 1 person
you are welcome my old friend 🙂 find out who am I 😛
LikeLiked by 1 person
Lovestruck, sensuous and romantic again, I love this new tone of your poems..as you said in your own words, a spring approaching
LikeLiked by 1 person
And that spring is indication of new hope!
So thrilled to know you loved the tone of this one.
Thank you, sincerely.🙏
LikeLike
To new hope and more such romantic poetry ..cheers!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Let’s hope so. Cheers!#8217;s!
LikeLiked by 2 people
As always, a beautiful poem ! ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
As always, I am thankful for such kind words!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Flawless from start to finish! Another excellent one!! 💕
LikeLiked by 1 person
Coming back to romantic verse after a long time. I am so glad you loved it!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your romantic verse always inspires me! Not that your other poetry doesn’t either…you just have a way with words. 😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow! That is deeply flattering now.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I loved this immensely! I especially loved ‘with petrichor dripping from my tongue” … I love that smell, especially while it’s still raining, and the sound and smell combine for a cozy and enchanting, almost nostalgic feeling of love.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Petrichor is always magical and mystical to me. It speaks so much, I feel!
Thank you for connecting to my words.
Really appreciate it.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for connecting with me! You reached me, and I liked that.
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂🙏
LikeLike
Your poetry is always great but I gotta ask where do you get your images from? You always have fascinating images to mesh with your poems.
LikeLiked by 2 people
It’s all Pinterest. I take a couple of minutes actually to browse my genre!
LikeLiked by 1 person
You do a great job with that
LikeLiked by 1 person
BRAVO
LikeLiked by 1 person
Always appreciate your words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Not reading to many blogs today because I am struggling with my vision. So happy I didn’t miss this one.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You have no idea Andrew how much that means to me. I totally understand your part and wish you nothing but peace and blessings.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much. I appreciate that. There are days blogging is more like work instead of the fun it was intended to be,
Be well. Stay inspired, Would love to read more great posts like this.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Superb
LikeLiked by 1 person
So many thanks to you!
I am always pleased to hear from you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
A favorite!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Aww🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person
💜
LikeLike
First paragraph slowly approached like gentle air..I mean you have wrote those kind of lines many times…and then second paragraph..my most favorite line was ” Sunflowers melting” I loved this expression .I always wonder how do you imagine these kind of things..because when I think of flower to write something poetic,either dark or romantic,petals,fade,aroma,sun,beauty…etc..will come to mind..flower melting is something different…like its either plastic to melt in heat or flower has heart to melt..both ways of imagination is wonderful..and last paragraph..” You bit my neck that night
and you saw your name imbued
in frames and pieces
like a soft cloth residing
under my moonlit blood….. like..how do you even get a thought of biting neck like vampire and taking moon into the veins..and lighting the blood…savage…hmm..devika..if I go on like this…I have to say a lot..let’s stop here
LikeLike
Firstly, it’s all about how I perceive such love and secondly my ink writes about it. I am actually glad you loved that melting of sunflower for its again an Oxymoron speech and I have realised so far you know my genre quite well now.
Thank you Kalyan for such a heart melting review. Each time your words sound so honest and that is the best thing I could receive.
Always honoured to receive your honest words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I know..you love oxymoron..when someone appreciates your oxymoron speech..it means that they also the similar kind of things..anyway..I always love to speak about your poem..not just for sake of doing that..the love and happiness while reading your poem make me do that
LikeLike
And that is the reason I sincerely read your kind words each time you shower it on my work.
I truly value your words and that is something you know.
Thanks!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for valuing my comments..glad
LikeLike
Great one!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
wow, that was very good! Very visual… and you made me smell rain! Beautiful!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am glad you smelled that!
Thanks.
LikeLiked by 1 person
🙂
LikeLike
Lovely! Just beautiful!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hey Penny!
Must I say you are a kind soul to say such words. Thank you and I would be looking forward to reading your words.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you! I found you through Megha’s World blog. She’s wonderful and thinks you are too, so I just had to check you out!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Grateful I am.
LikeLiked by 1 person
An equinoxing intoxicating
piece of writing.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wow, I especially loved this! Such strong images. Perfect to fall asleep to! ❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hope you have a nice sleep then.😊❤️
LikeLike
hi! Thank you! 🌧☔️😊
LikeLiked by 1 person
Beautiful exposition.The metaphors you have used to define the love …Orion singing, petrichor and the sunflowers melting are the epitome of beauty, love, and sensuality.Once again, you have made my soul sing, Devika.
LikeLiked by 1 person
❤️❤️❤️❤️
LikeLiked by 1 person
This made me close my eyes, shut my body and let it all “soak in”. Slowly. 💙
LikeLiked by 1 person
I hope now you feel all good.
Thank you for such nice words.❤️
LikeLike
👍🙂
LikeLiked by 1 person