Your collarbone clicks stars
poultice on my lips,
Beneath your tongue, I sit and sing
with wavelengths sticking my iris,
my newly born legs, bosom divine
weeds grow in this prismatic air,
between my fingers and your coiled words.
Temperatures romance and seductions occur.
In the warmth and futility,
hallucinations weave your face on my pillow
I lick it and suck it.
Colours vibrant and molten
I lick it and suck it,
your face is my religion.
©MVS
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
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Devika you are back with a bang,you are queen of this genre,every line is a bliss,” Beneath your tongue,I sit and sing,” This line is fantabulous..it says how one can be slave to the pleasure of tongue and how one enjoys that..very innovative.. and other lines.”Your hallucination weave the face,I lick it and suck it” ,your face is my religion, ..are very beautiful metaphors,and the one more beautiful line is..TEMPERATUREs ROMANCE,wow …two bodies romancing,you instead compared the romance with temperatures..this is Soo good..
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I simply imagined my love while writing this piece and I am actually missing him so here is this treat for you. Thank you for loving these lines.
It really feels great to be back and to be loved more and more.
Your words are extremely serene right now.
Thank you.
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Ohhh….He must be lucky because whenever you want to tell him how much you love you will write him a poem on him ..this is bliss for him…
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He knows it all
Thank you 🙏
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Hmmm..great then
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… a bit troubled…
🤗🌹
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Sorry?
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The feelings one gets reading this poem are of a troubled soul…
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Actually, it was supposed to be romantic.
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… maybe this is just what I perceived about it…
🤗
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Oh no darling, it surely is all about cravings and romance.
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Love this and especially the last line! 💜
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Aww, thanks.❤️
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It’s my pleasure. 💜
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This was very sensual!! The genre change was awesome! 😊😊
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Yes, it actually felt nice as I wrote this.
Thank you!
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Glad! 😊 And, welcome!
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Intense and romantic..but I didn’t understand the following lines:
weeds grow in this prismatic air,
between my fingers and your coiled words
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Wild things happen.
Thank you for your words!
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Ah..makes sense 🙂
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” your face is my religion” dripping with romance…👌
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Thank you Ankan.
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☺️
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This is fantastic ❤ Such sexual energy coming from each line, I can practically feel the intense desire!
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Sexual energy? Oh my!
It was supposed to be gently romantic though.
Still, I am happy.😊
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Beautiful poem!
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Thank you.
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Your welcome
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oh wow this was great! steamy
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Thank you kind soul.
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“hallucinations weave your face on my pillow” YES!!!!!
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I am thrilled to hear your kind words Deah.
I do love you and your words!❤️
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It’s my pleasure. The feeling is very mutual. 🙂
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So much passion behind your words. The beauty of sensual love ♥️ amazing!
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Hey, thanks Rulla.
You are awesome.
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Just trying to be like you babe! ☀️
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❤️
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Your face is my religion..what better way to declare unabashed and untainted love.
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Exactly my dear friend.
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Arousing, Cuddly, Seductive, Sensual, Sensuous, Spicy, Steamy, Erotic
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Arousing, Cuddly, Seductive, Sensual, Sensuous, Spicy, Steamy, Erotic ❤
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“beneath your tongue, I sit and sing”… “between my fingers and your coiled words” you’re a genius!
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I felt the romanticism of your poem.
Devika, this is one of my favorites and truly one of your best. 🙂
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Your poem … Like a poultice
upon my soulful hips.
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Hips?
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Oops! A freudian typo … Again.
I blame your Jungian poem.
Can’t wait to blame it again.
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Wow! Thanks a bunch.
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You are very welcome
(now typing most carefully)
I say that … with my lips.
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Beautiful
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🙏🙏
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