It’s unnatural how you fall for me every day among the sunsets and pancakes. You caress my elbow, a star falls right upon my sliced forehead. The partitions are yellow, perforated, a sublime concoction of moisture and stories to foretell. The hoop of canticle vortex slides on my plump thigh and you begin to smile. It’s unnatural how you pause and speak. A diamond crackles in South. Blueberries put me to sleep in a land cryptic.
My nail cutter goes missing and my nostrils clog. I am a stack of insomnia with your wilderness living in my caramel heart. You wink and the paths collide. Shimmers. Cocktails of foreign kisses. My words vacillate with slick back pepper distorted prints. I blend in your pristine blood and something occurs. It’s all unnatural.
Fabrication of memories flutter. My lips and tongue all in motionless picture breaks. Silence and Love. Love and Silence. My eyelids are soft now, like baby powder on my stomach, sliding and awake. You sit and breathe effortlessly. Alchemy occurs.
It’s all unnatural.
This is nice.
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Thank you
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Now this was an exalting read, words woven delicately, in each and every line! Effervescent sublimity! Very unexpected, a divergence from your usual verses! Glad! 😊
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I do write prose as well. This was written after a long time gap though so may be it went unexpected. But I am thrilled to learn you loved it, rishu.
Thank you.
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Oh! I had quite imagined you doing verses, re! I was talking about the emotions here! 😂
Welcome! Great write up!
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Oh, thank you in that case.
I do romantic work as well. Haha.
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I see. Ha Ha! 😊
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Splendid ❤
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Thank you!
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Amazing write. An absolute pleasure to read.
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Means a lot, Andrew.
Hope you are well.
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As well as can be expected. Thank you.
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This is beautiful, a prose wrapped in poetic pearls.Its good to see your pen flooding beautiful emotions of love and its all natural.😇🙏
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This is brilliant! Yes, and may we never lose that feeling.
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.. maybe it’s unnatural… but it fills the heart like nothing else…
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Exactly!
That is such a pure thing.❤️❤️
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‘Among the sunsets and pancakes’…ooo lovely. Great read. 👌
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Yes, well that’s how I imagine it.
Thank you for connecting to it. I do appreciate your words.
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Kudos to your imagination.
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Great poem. I was struck by the sunsets and pancakes line. You write well, thanks for the post
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Actually this is a prose Poetry and I am touched to hear your sweet words.
Thank you a lot.
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There’s so much in this entire piece to unpack, however, I’m going to quote the following because it’s flat out AMAZING!
“My nail cutter goes missing and my nostrils clog. I am a stack of insomnia with your wilderness living in my caramel heart. You wink and the paths collide. Shimmers. Cocktails of foreign kisses”
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Hey that’s my favorite too apparently and honestly speaking I am more than smiles to know you love this flat!
How sweet you are dear friend.❤️
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😊 It’s a beautiful section. So beautiful.
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Okay, I shall not be teary!😊❤️
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Haha. Haha. 💙
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This is gorgeous. Really enjoyed reading this! 💜
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Baby powder on stomach!! Oh my. I’m gripping a raw potato here, have mercy!
Your writing, always intriguing with rivers of molten feeling. ❤️
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You are such a master in surrealistic/dark poetry. I think this one is my favorites of yours.
There’s something about:
“a star falls right upon my sliced forehead. The partitions are yellow, perforated, a sublime concoction of moisture and stories to foretell.”
How don’t know what influence this poem…but I’m curious to know. Love it. 🙂
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I’m not going to lie, this made me tear up!! Beautiful, can’t wait to read what you write next ❤️ xx
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That’s because you are the sweetest, Rachel.
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This is fabulous, poetic writing. Romantic, vulnerable, erotic..you must write more prose like I always said.
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Thank you and yes I would be doing more of it.
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and we readers wait with bated breath 🙂
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Aye!🙏
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This is too good,it’s always pleasure to read your lines on romance and love.” the hoop of canticle vortex slides on my plump thigh” deep AMD too much poetic
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I am so thankful that your loved this prose as well Kalyan
This was romantic for a change now.
And I am really pleased to know you liked it.
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Why wouldn’t I like it..you write it I will like it..that simple
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Sure thing.
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And the line ” I am stack of insomnia with your wilderness in my caramel heart” wowwww..devika..you killed it
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Thank you so much.
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This is so majestic and serene. Utterly beautiful ♥️
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Thank you Rulla!
Sending hugs.
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This piece is a slice of Lemon Merengue Pie!! A joy to read!!
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Wow! That’s terrific.
Thank you.
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This is one of my favourite pieces of your’s. Simply gorgeous my dear ❤
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Aww, now I am humbled.😍🤗
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Brilliant. I love your writing style😊💝
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Thank you Shayra!❤️
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It’s my pleasure reading your posts. And I would feel honoured if you will comment on my post and guide me to improve , or suggest me if it needed😊💝
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Sure sister.
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😊😊😘
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And the drops of sweetness drips from the caramel heart of my sweet poetess.I don’t know what to add to an already praised piece of mesmerizing art.What a delight would be to the lover of such a beauty hiding all that unnatural love.
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A-M-A-Z-I-N-G!
Very much natural it is, for me, to fall in love with this piece!
” I am a stack of insomnia with your wilderness living in my caramel heart. You wink and the paths collide. Shimmers. Cocktails of foreign kisses. My words vacillate with slick back pepper distorted prints. I blend in your pristine blood and something occurs. ” My goodness! Gloriously written ☺️
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Hi, sorry for the late reply.
Thank you so much for this beautiful comment, orange.
Love you.
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Love you too 💙
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💙💙
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Words are not enough to praise your writing talent, Devika.
Every poem is so unique & intense. Loved it!
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Wonderful. I still haven’t understood the subtle difference between prose and poetry, though you tried teaching me
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