Loneliness weeps and grows like a fungus
in toes and fingernails, with cascading webs of cryptic silence
It shudders like hurricanes,
a mirrored tattoo of wild breaths,
Yellow you may say—
It clasps inside my knee joint
I am born again, inside the pain of lone nights
with a silent bat hovering my windowsill
and my half lit cigarette, peek a boo.
These are stages of disintegration,
body biting body
skulls digesting mucus.
Thousands of pools of madness
Loneliness is a silent killer.
Iron tongues. Levitating.
Circles residing in the swamps of squares,
Total Madness.
©MVS
Oh I can feel this.
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Loneliness is like a mad thing to happen. Sorry if you feel this Ankit.
Peace and light!
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Nothing lasts forever.
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That’s the beauty of life.
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Very powerful! Well done!
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Thank you, Bill.
Means a ton!
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Always so gifted…. what a pleasure to read you…
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Aye!
Thanks friend.
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Loneliness,may be it is friend of depression and sadness,sometimes friend of peace and happiness.We don’t know how this comes,sometimes we only go to it and go through it..body eating body,skull digesting mucus as you said..I can relate…it will eat you like fungus..why fungus when it’s dangerous than virus
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So well decoded, Kalyan!
Loneliness is really a disease I feel as it gets to your body and mind like a parasite.
Thank you for understanding my words deeply.
Peace out!
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Peace in!
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It is a consuming plague so difficult to remove
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Exactly!
Thank you for sharing your valuable thoughts. I really appreciate it.
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in that dark place, perspective changes, and certain things can become clear. yet it is a trial, with pain and anguish to go through. I hope you can see that you are not completely alone, as a lot of us have gone and are going through it as well.
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Thank you for such warm words.
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I hate to be alone & can relate to it completely, there are thosands of things dancing inside your mind with unbearable pain with silence everywhere..thats close to madness and it’s in your words.
Wonderful as always on wordcraft.
Have a great weekend ahead☺
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It’s saddening to know how people feel hurt due to loneliness. I hope you take care and stay happy ahead, brother.
Peace and light
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This is hurting.. and I feel this. Indeed madness.
Things will be alright. For you. For me. For us.
Love ❤️
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I am sending pure love to you
Stay blessed.❤️
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All the bundles of love back at you ❤️❤️
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I’m often speechless to express how your words touch me, Devika! This is no exception.
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I am so touched, Angie.
Hope you are all well.❤️
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You write beautifully. I am, thank you!
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😊😊
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I agree with Angela! 💕
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Aye!❤️
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And yet loneliness brings out the best from an artist, no one brings these half lit cigarettes and silent madness to the domain of romanticism like you do.
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Perhaps I am the saddest and the loneliest!
Thank you for reading it.
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or maybe we all are someway or the other but you have figured out the way to channel these and create beautiful poetry.
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This is a good piece. I can totally relate to this. Loneliness has a way of looking for a friend. He finds them and gets stuck!
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Thank you for your valuable lines.
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You’re most welcome
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“Loneliness is a silent killer.” You always speak the truth, Devika. Another stunning piece of poetry!
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Truth is what we write as writers.
Thank you sweetheart.❤️
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You’re very welcome dear 💕
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I love this👌👌👌💘
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Thank you so much.
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O you lovely troubled soul. Look what a marvelous work you have created.
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Lovely troubled soul? That’s a nice one.
Thanks!
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Very very good.
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😊❤️
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I would rather be dead by the loneliness than living with the assholes. However again great verse. Loved it. ☺️
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Always! That’s how it should be.
Likewise, brother.
Thank you for the affirmation though.
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Yeah.
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so good x
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Thanks dear friend.
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Love it. As much as I can associate my own expression with these feelings, finally decided of my solitude – no more faking for the sake of anyone.
Take care!
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I have come here to read and learn.
Frankly I am looking forward a word from the guru 😊
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