Sugar granules on my eyelids
define the numb, static voice
beneath the waves of poetry,
absolute darkness.
The times flutter on asymmetrical length
hypnotical lifeless mellow tunes.
Words break, poetry aborts
A mother takes a life of her son.
It’s sharp. Black.
As I think, a tree detaches a leaf
As I swirl, a star weeps
End. End. End.
Nature perspires wax,
drooling loose vibrations,
Ink is lacking from my blood.
My blood is blue in reverse order, stale.
How many more tantrums?
Time is satirical,
and my body sinks in pits of crime
Analogies weep and mother smirks.
Time ruins beautiful things,
spring- Ataxia of Poetry.
P.S- It’s not a complete Eulogy, but it’s quite insane to think what if one day it is?
© MVS
Beautiful ❤️
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As you are my darling.
Thank you.❤️😊
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I am in love with the caption ‘eulogy to poetry’ ❤❤🎭
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I am in love with the caption ‘eulogy to poetry’
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Hey!
Thank you. I am actually flattered with this feedback as I was a bit cryptic about it.
Much love!
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Yeah I was too at the beginning when I read the caption because a eulogy is written as a remembrance…..🎭
I was a bit sceptic because I didn’t want poetry to die…. 🌎
But the caption was the opening that made me read the whole thing…❤
It was perfect…..no blemishes found 😂
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Thank you for this affirmation.
Much love!
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Beautiful. An awesome piece of writing.
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Oh, thank you so much Andrew!
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Loved it, and yes the title is apt 🙂
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Glad you loved the title.
Love you.
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xx
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What a beauty this is! Dark at its darkest best. You’re brilliant, D!
Love!
💖💖
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Thank you Chhaya!
Always love you and your words, you know that.❤️
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You are a sweetheart, D! 💖🤗💖
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This is good..eulogy with lot of metaphors..I love the way you compared the mother and son relationship with tree and leaf..because generally leaf detach from tree..but you wrote ” tree detaches from leaf” what more can I say about this line..you are absolute symbol of poetic brilliance..and same think you compared with ” ink is missing in my blood” I am learning a lot from your lines..👌👌👌👌..
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Your words never fail to humble me. I cannot thank you enough for always devouring my words like a dream.
Means so much, Kalyan!
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Good write
defining the numb
poetry abortions
“a tree detaches a leaf”- like a prosthetic
the weeping stars wishing their million years end
perspiration of wax,beeswax-it reminds me of mud
dauber nests from one of my childhood homes on a crazy steep hill under the super tall wooden back porch.
i want to build tree houses now.
well penned.
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I am grateful that you took out some time to read my poetry and it always thrills me to hear your details and verses.
Gratitude!
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Beautiful!
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Thank you, rishu!
I am humbled.
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Welcome!
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Nice piece!!
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Always a pleasure!
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Poignant. So poignant
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Lorraine!
You know how much I appreciate listening from you and I always wish light to you.
You are brilliant as I always say.❤️
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Oh my goodness MVS. Thankyou so much. I loved your poem
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❤️❤️❤️
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This is so beautiful.
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This is beautiful!
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That was beautiful.
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Grateful I am to you.
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Hope that day never comes. A beautiful eulogy though.A sweet coincidence as I wrote a poem in writer’s block yesterday.
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Absolutely beautiful!
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Thanks love.
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Insightful and deep …
from a place where angels weep.
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Thank you
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This is absolutely beautiful, it inspires me to write again!! Thank you
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❤️
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Poetry won’t die, as long as there are great writers like you💖💖💖 The last line: “spring- Ataxia of Poetry” speaks to me so much. Ahhh! I hope you feel good today, here’s a sunflower to brighten up your day 🌻 Love & hugs 💖
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Thank you Eli.
❤️❤️
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I hope it never comes to that as you say in ps. but this would make a beautiful eulogy indeed
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A beautifully dark poem. Thank you
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you are an inspiration honestly. Your poetry warms me and expresses emotions that i fail to articulate
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Oh my! Such high praise.
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poets like you inspire me to keep writing
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This is phenomenal. That title got me chills as I loved it absolutely. There are so many instances that I fell in love with, reading them again. Awesome. I would love to know your opinions on my well, ramblings 😀 Thank you for this one, simply beautiful.
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You are a sweet soul to say such words.
I am humbled.
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Thank you dear 🙂
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❤️
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♥
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End. End. End.
Oh ! That gave me goosebumps !
Very impactful and beautiful.
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Aww, how sweet of you.
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This took me to some next level ❤
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Wow, it means so much to hear this.❤️
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Beautifully written!
Regards
Roy
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Thank you, Roy!
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Beautiful to read
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Thank you.
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Excellent write, glad I stumbled across this… i seem to stumble a lot.. I should really watch my step.. just saying..
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Thank you, kindly.
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Poetry aborts….star weeps….nice phrases.
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Thank you.
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Time is satirical – I love that.
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Thank you.
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This is inspiring. Love the verbage used.
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I am happy to learn that.
Thank you.
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I was inspired at just “valiant”
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Meaning?
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Such elegant words! I love how lifelike your words are, and look forward to reading more!
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I am deeply honored.
Thank you for your soothing words.
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It must have hurt a lot for a tree to detach a leaf. This is hard that I can’t even say my condolences.
I love the imagery!
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I am so glad that you resonated so well with the metaphors.
Means a lot.
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I love the wait you wrote this eulogy, a dramatic dance of poetry with death. Great work!
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I’ve written a few eulogies in my time… none quite as bleak as this one, though none with quite as much imagery either. Very well written.
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What a great thing to say, I am moved.
Thank you so much.
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I love this one. Perhaps time does not ruin beautiful things 😊
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Perhaps
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“Time ruins beautiful things”
I think I’d take that.
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Isn’t that the bitter truth?
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Of course it is. So deep a truth.
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You did a gorgeous work by hinging these words together! Nice!!
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Thanks dear
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Love this, seriously beautiful piece.
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Hey, thank you so much for stopping by.
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your poems are just beautiful!
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Thank you so much.
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I am new on wordpress, my page contains mostly quotes, poem and travel diaries, would love it if you could give me some reviews on it.
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Sure.
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