Tonight, I shall smirk and produce cactus in my bones. Reverberating your conjured beds exhausted me. Tonight I shall not be a bean of pelican feathers, a china crockery. With the burial of your carbon mouth, I burn till the sky thumps. And then you shall explode the way I did.
Your clandestine face is like a green moth today. Pulverizing. Torrential.
The language of lonesome affairs strikes and burns my ginger thigh, moisture resides, phosphorescent sigh.
Scream and watch that burning sky. Swallow the eclipse. Revolve and rotate like wild sharks. A stack of lipids and liquids shall only entice you. You leap and crawl. Your skin is that of marine molluscs, fidgeting, concealing.
Tonight, I refuse to entertain you.
The burning wax is still my favourite companion.
®My Valiant Soul
Sweet work Dev. Your detailing is niche perfect. Loved it 🙂
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Dev sounds manly. Let’s stick to Devika.
Just saying!
And thank you, sincerely./p>
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Oh I apologize Devika .
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No worries.
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Nice work 👍
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Thank you!
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I think this is about opportunitistic behavior of men who only see for physical pleasure in women. “Reverberating your conjured beds exhausted me. ..it says clearly that she is vexed with lust on bed. And last line ” explode the way I did..” says you want to show him what loneliness is and you want to know him to know the value of your presence not just physical activity..kind of revenge. Even she want to avoid him she still feel lonely which you wrote about that in ” language of lonesome affairs..and in the last paragraph you said that the body and lust only he is wanting that from her in beautiful line about sharks and lids and liquids that entice…well done..not much difficult it’s neat.
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You nailed it once again.
I am happy you know the wants in this piece. It’s simple and clearly targeting that part of male society who are obsequious towards female perhaps!
All the parts are well understood and explained by you.
Thank you so much!
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Nailed it again.??..reader never nails..it’s only the writers do lot of effort.So all credits to you.I understood that you targeted that on men who concentrate on temporary pleasure and use their feelings.
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As you say, Kalyan!
Thanks for reading it with intensity.
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Without intensity I can never find intensity.It’s all your greatness👏👏👏
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You are a very good writer and you keep getting better and better! 💛😉
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Saying that to me is really a big thing.
So many thanks to you!
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You deserve it. I enjoy your writing and imagery. Mine is always so plain and blah.
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Actually you are positive and write about beautiful things and I am just a loner perhaps!
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Thank you for a perspective I hadn’t thought about. Made me feel better 😃
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You capture so much! I enjoy your poetry very much! I hope whomever this is about learned to respect a little more! Fantastic writing!
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So many thanks for understanding the point of my work here.
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Wow
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Glad it made you feel” wow”.
Thanks!
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No problem
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Love that last line
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Thank you.
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🌹❤️
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Yes, be yourself, despite how certain members of society attempt to manipulate you into change. Your last line is perfect in encapsulating the sentiment in this piece.
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Exactly!
Who cares about others. People hurt and hurt.
Thank you once again!
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Indeed! I’ve been one of those who has hurt others and I take responsibility for that. Life’s lessons are there to help us learn to be better. maybe next time around I will be a better man that I have been. You are welcome, Devika.
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Life teaches us and makes us cautious and wise.
Hope you shall be wise too!
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It does and I hope so, too!
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This IS art! Its beautiful how your words create a contortion of images in the readers head full of color and movement, reading this was like looking at a painting, only better!
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This is something that I want to reread multiple times!!!
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Welcome back here Tapasi. I always love to hear your beautiful words.
Thank you dear.😊
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And I always love to read your writings, please is all mine 🙂 much love dear ❤
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I can feel the intensity simmering in your emotions you have written this piece.I always loved the metaphors in your poetry.Gives me a different perspective about poetry.Poetry redefined by Devika.
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I am really honored to have your kind reads today.🙏
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