Today was one such day when I took my seizure pills and went to sleep
in the darkest of crisp floors of dreams and nightmares
with my cigarettes still burning, mouth full of water
In the turbid walks of women’s lane,
a niche of mirrored talks happened
with a soul crooked and cracked
Vinegar lips kissing Dracula fingernails and hope of stained floors
I feel stitches in my stomach, spewing out disgust arrays of unheard bone cracks,
It happened beneath the yellow door of my cauldron of thoughts and anger,
I was partially a dreamcatcher and partially a sleepwalker
Silence of Aurora fills my thin bone marrow
And tells me another tale of liquid voices, tales and dreams.
I gasp. Observe. Run and sleep and dream in circulation.
©MVS
Descriptively dark Devika. :).
Loved it
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The idea was of depicting a part of dreams and apparently it seemed dark.
So thank you for appreciating my thoughts here.
Much appreciated!
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“I was partially a dreamcatcher and partially a sleepwalker….” – I love the way you phrase this….so tender!
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wow .. disturbing, gorgeous, mystical … like shards of glass glinting in the moonlight
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I simply love your comment as it describes a lot about my this verse.
Thank you so much for taking out time to read my work.
Much appreciated!
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Wow this is beautiful! You are so talented. ☺💛
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You are simply being kind to me Walt.
Much respect!
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I say what I feel ☺
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Love it. ☺✨
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Thanks dear.😊
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This is really great.
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Thank you so much.
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Sigmond Freud won’t be pleased at all!
🤣😂 The darkness & mystery in the poem has this completely empowering essence which is difficult to ignore. Lovely piece. 🙂
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Thanks Shambhavi
I am thrilled to know you actually read my dark verse because often I feel not everyone knows what I write. But readers like you are always supportive and a darling.
Thanks love.
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The vicious cycle of dreams can be overwhelming. I can relate to it, it’s more of things we ought to do, the things we do and the things that happen to us. Somewhere in between, the dreams have this annoying dreary way of extending it’s clutches like roots of a plant deep into the soil like malignancy. It’s a dark feeling that we remember due to the adrenaline rush that accompanies while we sleep on the outside but only to mask the living hell on the inside. I don’t know why I’d so much to say, I’m sorry for being so descriptive.
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That’s a great analogy and interpretation. Your thoughts are deep and make a lot of sense as I resonate with them.
Thanks for sharing your lovely views Shambhavi. So much love.
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I’m glad you could decipher my blabber Devika. 😎😂
At times, I can go gaga over things that trigger my chain of thoughts.
Stay Blessed dear.
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I would love to listen your talks and words.❤️
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Wow, you’re gem of a person! 😊😊
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❤️
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Each word sticks to my memory like a broken heart. You wrote this in such a dreamy bold way. I love your thoughts and imagination expressed in this masterpiece. Well done!
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Hi Apple( if that’s your name, it is Lovely).
I am really thankful and blessed to have genuine readers like you who connect to my words with utter depth and provoking thoughts.
Thank you for such a lovely gesture. I really appreciate it. Would be looking forward to your writings!
Much love.
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Yes that is my real name, thank you! Excited to read more of you in your blog ☺️
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Lovely meeting you Apple.
So nice to see your writings.
Stay blessed!😊
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Wow….a poem full of pandemonium! Some kind of disorder that I absolutely loved and I read it atleast 3 times….I’ll read it again I think….loved it!❤
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Hey Tapasi.
I am once again touched by your humbling words and thank you so much if my work was worth reading more than once. Makes me happy.
Hugs!:)
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You are an amazing writer and that’s what I think I need to tell you more than once 😀….have a nice day!
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Aww.
Wish you the same dear one.
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This is the most evocative piece I have read in some time.
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That makes me happy and honoured in the same process.
So far, your words have always been dear to me.
Thank you Lee!
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This poem spoke to me in so many ways. The imagery hit me hard…it was almost like I could picture it in front of my eyes. Such a fantastic piece of poetry. You are amazing, D! 🤗
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Thanks Chayya.
I understand this could be a bit dark for you for your writings are surreal to read and poignant, but I am glad you felt this.
Thanks a bunch dearie!❤️😊
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I find your poems as surreal and poignant, D! And the darkness adds even more to the whole craft and its beauty. 🤗
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Loved it
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Thank you Caroline.
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Welcome
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The difference between writers like me and you is that..when we want to tell about dreams,we just go little deep And tell the analogies and comparisons and all,but you will hold reader hand And take us through dark room of dreams,AMD open the door and make us feel what’s happening behind the walls of draness,the cauldron,dracula,hope on the floors ,spewing,stitching..you create your own world in the darkness..and once you show your world..we will be mesmerized with your architecture of words
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May I take a moment here to inform you that all the writers are unique in their own style. Some are great in expressing a single thought with hundreds of imagery while the others give goosebumps with their thoughts only. So much of writing and so much to read and learn.
So I would say you are special in your own way unlike others. We all are learners here.
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Yeah…but here mainly I compared myself with you.There are many other good writers I agree with you.abut I just how superior you are to me in thinking and writing
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Beautiful like the unrolling of a dark velvet curtain revealing those shards of glass mentioned earlier.
Always an adventure to read you!
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Means so much Venessa.
I truly adore a writer like you and so I am humbled to have you here.
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Wow Devika! I’m honoured. The feeling is definitely mutual! 🙂
(And I am curious about your seizure meds, my sister takes them too, she has for years and she finally is taking the right dosage etc. to control them. It has been a long, hard journey. I hope yours are controlled?)
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I have been taking my seizure meds since I remember, too many CT scans and too many meds often drove me crazy also but now things are under control. I take only a few of them which is really awesome and I would say this to your sis, please always choose the correct doctor with the correct meds.
Hope she is in the pink of health now.
So much love to her and you.
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I am so glad to hear that!!
Yes, there were times she felt crazy too. She has been through a lot. She has even had part of her brain removed, years ago.
But then she had a change of doctor and it made all the difference, as you know. She is healthy now, thank you! ❤
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Oh my I can’t even begin to imagine that. But then again, she must be too brave!
So glad she is fine now.
Hugs!❤️
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It truly was a nightmare at the time. And she does have anxiety issues after everything she has been through. But physically, she is fine now, it’s is quite amazing.
I am so glad you are both fine now! And you are blessing the world with your talent. Hugs back!
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Anxiety always kicks in like that uninvited guest. We need to handle it.
Thank you for your blessings Venessa. Means so much.😊❤️
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So nicely
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Thank you.
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Oh jeez Aishwarya, you were resting in my spam section.so sorry.
And thank you lovely for this.
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That feels like my brain last night. Restless trying to sleep fitfully after actually taking my seizure meds and having odd dreams of dragonflies and weird men.
Super cool poem. Loved it!
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I feel that. Completely.
And I feel your world very well.
Thank you so much for writing your words!
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Your poem brings me to the feeling of the light sleep where we keep oscillating between the dream and reality. The dream part of it has a very dark shade to it. Liked it. Your poetry creeps up like a vine on my mind.
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Ain’t that feeling a bit cryptic? I am so happy to know my words moved your imagination and thinking process.
Means a lot always, Megha!
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They always do.You write so vividly.
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😊
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This is amazing, i feel like having a dark dream wherein looking for lost escape routes.The words & presentation are just as realities.
Keep writing!👍
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Beautiful and complex, as always, dear!
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