Do not cross your doubts in my face of trees
Humongous rocks piling and shattering altogether
I am a cloak of shadow, hiding and humming chants
to release my sanity, blue waters of Mediterranean hunger
Clap my soul, and find the twinnings of pieces of glass
Fixated on the roots of my birthplace, insanity clamours.
Reds and Blacks
beneath
the sheets of night,
Liquor and it’s all forms
enticing and questioning
I knock my mind, to check the sanity
and words perch like a thick rope
entangling and pressing my blood,
knots and knots and knots
I check for my sanity now each day
for people melt into my mind, askew drawings
and then question my sanity.
©MVS
A poet’s sanity is her poetry, the place where all her hopes and dreams are achieved and fears conquered. Sometimes, her poetry becomes a solace for others, just as your words are for me. You are an inspiration, dear. Brava!!!! ❤ ❤ ❤
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You know my immense love for you and that shall not come as a shocker anymore now.
I am always mesmerized by your charming words.
Thank you.❤️
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You’re welcome, love. I am blushing and smiling now. This love is reciprocated, dear, let me tell you 🙂 ❤ ❤ ❤
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Aww.
May I know your name if you don’t mind?
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🙂 Of course, dear. It’s Soriah. It’s nice to meet you, Devika ❤
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What a beautiful name.😊
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Thank you 🙂 ❤
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I love your name ❤
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“…for people melt into my mind, askew drawings
and then question my sanity” wonderful lines. 🙂
Loved it!
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Hi dearie.
Hope you are well and thank you for leaving your trace on my world.❤️
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I’m very well. Hope it’s the same with you as well 🙂
💙💙💙
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Sure love.❤️
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The lines took my heart….so beautiful! ❤
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Means so much to hear this lovely comment.
Thank you dear one.
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Pleasure is mine 🙂
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wonderful
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Thanks Caroline.
Sending hugs!
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welcome poet
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I guess the insanity in the poet’s mind is the things which keep the poetry alive. otherwise the words will die a merciless death in the rampant chaos of heartless reality. Loved it.
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Thanks Megha.
And I believe sanity and insanity both gives us the pleasure to write and think the bright words and even the dark ones.
Thanks for your insights.
Much love!
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Mesmerising words, tangling me in them, entwined in their charm I am lost.
Fantabulous ❤️
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It seems we haven’t talked since ages I don’t know why!
But yes I love you and thanks P!
❤️
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It seems.
I am so low these days. Not here on WP much.
Love you more ❤️
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Yes even I missed a lot here lately as I was busy traveling. But hey, I hope you will fight and conquer dearie or even better just feel it and write it till you feel the sunshine which you will.(if it makes sense)
Just hang in.
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It does make sense love.
I am hanging in here. ❤️❤️
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Yes sure that’s nice.😊❤️
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I’ll have to read this one again! Ha Ha. And a few others that I missed. In the morning maybe. Hmmm. Was beautiful, but have it read it again!
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I will be grateful if you read my work.
Thank you so much!
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Ah! The pleasure’s mine!
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I loved it completely📝👌👌
Creative minds are crazy that is why they are different.
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Yes, crazy is the word!!
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I especially loved:
“…for people melt into my mind, askew drawings and then question my sanity”
There’s a fine line between sanity and insanity, I believe. Its largely based upon perception. Passion is both sane and insane, no? But it’s that which fuels poetry…the world, I believe.
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“Passion is both sane and insane”so true!
I really appreciate your thinking here.❤️
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My pleasure.
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So glad I found you. Excellent every time
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That means a lot.
Thank you so much.
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Really good poem. Love the name of your title.
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Thank you.
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I read this earlier and I liked it. I read it again now, and it makes so much sense. I find myself questioning my sanity too often these days. I often just want to give up writing, or write for myself, and just walk away from everything and everyone. I can’t make sense of existence, even though I’m desperately trying to. So this really resonated with me. Thank you.
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That happens, things begin to make sense as we read more diligently the essence of it.
And true, there are times even I want to write for myself and I believe I still do that for myself only.
Thanks a lot for your thoughts, Nitin.
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…for what is sanity if not conformity, the poet lives in her surreal world and writes what she feels will move the usually reluctant readers into theirs, being questioned is inevitable.
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So true.
The mind is always questioned.
Thank you for your words!
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It seems like, as poets, our sanity is always questioned.☺💛
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Oh yes it is.
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Beautiful! One peron’s madness is another person’s sanity. And what’s madness if not a higher sphere of consciousness?
https://lilaiamoreliwordsaresacred.wordpress.com/
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Ah, that’s interesting I guess!
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Our sanity would be elusive without your words. wonderful to see you back! 🙂
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Honoured to hear your words.
And also happy I am!🙏
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Intriguing and expressive. Love it!
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I am thankful to have your gracious words!
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Разве мы сами можем себя проверить? 🙂
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Please English now. 🙏
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Can we check ourselves? =)
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I check for my sanity now each day
for people melt into my mind, askew drawings
and then question my sanity.
I find resonance and so much truth in these lines.
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Nice poem!
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Thank you.
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Beautiful work here.
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Glad to hear your words once again.
Thank you.
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Okay. Was just a little bit busy with school stuff but I’m good. Have a wonderful time
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And shouldn’t it be Mediterranean! Dunno, I’m new to this.
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Oh crap, how did that happen.
I guess that’s the reason I use my computer to write.
Anyway, thanks!
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No. Lol. It’s correct! Ha Ha Ha. Working on my vocab. Lol.
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I need to recheck then.
I am in haste for most of the times.
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Naah! It’s correct. My bad. 🙂
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My bad! Sorry.
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Wow, all I can say, is you definitely have a way with words!
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And I am thankful that you read my words.
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