Watching the movement of emptiness sinking on my nostrils,
A part of Earth tremors inside my Corona of dismantling systems
With crooked pens, I still draw mundane loops of Reds and Black
Planets dance around my white waist
with slumbers of lilies stuck inside the windowsill
I leap and quiver, rebuking my seizure
For the numerous cracks now building under my blouse
Silhouette of Blueberries ruptures somewhere.
My eyelids become heavy and heavy
and the tears as my faithful companion
I sleep and walk and turn and weep.
Oh, my fingers shall be healed
and the knives of blood shall be washed
It shall be done.
It’s how we Survive.
©MVS
I shall never know how people come up with such beautiful ideas.
I really love how you fuse biological terms about the body, with galaxies of poetic words.
It’s just beautiful, I absolutely loved it.
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Biology, geometry everything is related to words only I believe.
Thank you for this lovely comment A!
So much love.
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❤
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So much in this. It’s quite overpowering , it’s wonderful reading between the lines. This is good 😊
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I feel this is a crooked voice of mine not that powerful but you are my hero.😊
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Oh my what a plethora of emotions.
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Hey brother.
Thank you for your your lovely visits.
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Still have me in awe every time you write. Wow, just wow ❤️
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Oh D!
Missed you.❤️
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I felt your words stabbing my chest.. Oh, you shall be healed. 🌻💖
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We all shall be healed.
Love to you ❤️
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Your words leave me breathless. ❤
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Aww.
You are sweet.
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You’re welcome, dear!
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What beauty you draw with your exotic verses, my dear D! It’s a blissful experience everytime I read you. 🤗
Much love!
❤️❤️❤️
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Wow..once again it’s beauty..sorry i didn’t read your last poems .I was little busy..but I really like this one..though it’s small it throws me down to the sorrowful world.” Every line is amazing..I want to explain in detail..but sorry..but really loved it
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I have been busy too.
But I am glad you took time to read my words.
Thank you.
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YOU are welcome devika
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After being lost out to so many exams returning to such a masterpiece of words again by MVS was absolutely delightful.
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And this really thrills me.
Thank you so much and I hope your exams went well.
😊
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😊
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“ I sleep and walk and turn and weep.”
This touched me. The entire piece. But these lines, I read me in these
You are amazing ❤️
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This was my personal favorite too.❤️
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❤️❤️
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very beautiful and full of emotion.
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Glad you liked it
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Planets dance around my white waist, beautiful 💜
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Appreciate your kind read.
Thank you.
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Reading your poetry is always an experience… there is so much depth and imagery that I re read each time…love your words… as always❤️️
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You are extremely beautiful and I have told you that already.
Thank you.😊
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❤❤
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This is the perfect poem to read after watching your name incorporated by the Blood Into Ink forum. Congratulations 🙂
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Oh yes that.
Thank you for your blessings.:)
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so very beautiful
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Hey Frida!
Many thanks.
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Reblogged this on Blood Into Ink and commented:
Devika Mathur/My Valiant Soul
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Thank you Christine.
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Reblogged this on Processo de integração e autenticidade and commented:
Acho maravilhoso o que escreveu. Penso que muitas vezes o sofrimento se prolonga por demasiado tempo. Mas como diz, no final, acabamos por sobreviver, apesar das lágrimas que rolam pela nossa face mesmo que nós não queiramos. Na verdade, a cura vai-se processando lentamente. Com muita dor, é certo. Se aceitarmos essa dor e a tornarmos válida para o nosso processo de evolução,ela torna-se mais leve, dói cada vez menos. Chegará o momento em que acaba por se integrar no nosso Eu superior e a sobrevivência passa a ser uma nova vida que começa.
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I do not understand Spanish but As for what I have understood by reading it you are talking about the pain and difficulties in dealing that pain and still surviving.
Thank you so much for resonating with my words and speaking so wisely about it.
Much love Maria!
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Não tem de agradecer. Eu estou consigo em partilhar as suas palavras comigo. Todos nós temos as nossas dores e nem sempre temos alguém para dizer: “Eu estou aqui para si”
Muita Paz e Amor. Maria
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Truly beautiful!
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Means so much coming from you.
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I am completely inadequate with the words to say how lovely this is. 🌺
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And that my friend actually tells me your immense love for it.❤️
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Yes, that’s how I feel about your poetry. ❤️
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So much gratitude. ❤️
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🌺
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You always amaze me! Love this
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Thank you.
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These days I do not find much inspiration for writing poetry, but your poems do that for me. 💖💖
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You still have it in you, I know.😊
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Thank you so much for your faith when I feel I have none. 🙂
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Always, dearie.😊
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I am really touched to see this sweet gesture.
Thank you!
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🙏🙏
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