Embedded in the swamps of paroxysm
where I see no constant paths or pavements
chipped walls, chipped florals, chipped winter
cascading all through my pale face
in delusions, in fallacies
I cracked the seeds of opulent hypocrisy of yours once
I shall do it again,
and again,
and again and again.
Till you split like apples and dice into cubes
with a naked foot of mine
I shall pierce you,
thawing your fingernails and burying
them into a grave
empty and swollen.
And then, you shall die. (claps, claps)
P.S- I know its all-new year thing going on everywhere but for me, a new year and new day is always when I am happy. Pardon my dark write-ups or even better deal with it! Who cares, after all!
©MVS
That’s a very good read for me. 🙂
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Thank you so much for always staying genuine and raw in your words Aquib.
Really appreciate this.
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Dark is ok. I write dark too sometimes. What’s New Tear antway? Nothing really. Only a moment in time. Life doesn’t change. I like this
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So true oh God I feel so happy to be reading your words.
Actually, there is nothing fancy about it. Fancy is only when our work changes a thing and creates something for the betterment of ourselves and others!!
Much love to you.😊
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Lol I just realised i made lots of mistakes in that comment. Sorry. I just dont see well lol
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Sometimes even I don’t.
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I haven’t been posting lately either for the same reason. It’s just another day for me. I don’t do the resolutions and all that. I figured I’d just wait it out, lol. But thanks for the post. It was just what I needed to read today.
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You know what even I didn’t post anything for last two days thinking ah..let the moment just go but today I couldn’t resist writing so here it is.
Feel so connected to you on this.
Thanks dear.
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That’s funny. I was laying here thinking, fuck it, I’m writing anyway…. then I decided to just read instead hahaha! Guess we were on the same wavelength.
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Ah. Sending hugs.lol😊😊
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Happy New Year devika..my poetic guru..let the new year bring all prosperity and success in this year
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Same to you.
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HNY
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To you as well dear
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No problem dealing with superb poetry!
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That makes me happy.
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Deep it is….powerful..luv it 🙂
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Thanks
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Just beautiful
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Thank you so much.
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I liked how you imagined it and put it into words. Good as always💖
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Thanks dear.
Love to you.
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It sounds like a burial ceremony!…
May be dark… but I find it beautiful to read!
❤
I hope tis a happy day for you and I wish you a very happy new year today and for all the days to come… 🙂
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Aww you are sweet must I tell you that.
Wishing you all the happiness.😊
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Hey HNY.I totally forgot to wish you ,mentor.
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Same to you brother.
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Soooo dark..but may be that’s the place where you find beauty.Really enjoyed it one of my favorite line is ” cracking the seeds of opulent hypocrisy…very beautiful..and in second paragraph at the end you mentioned how you revealed him with thawing fingers ,and how well you wrote..always awed
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Yes in darkness lies beauty!
Glad you liked my word play and the theme especially!
Many thanks.
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But why you like darkness so much
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Chipping all the kings men saw
identity drunk again
johnny apple seed would have been proud
we shall visit the crunch
with rapiers
not sheathed
for where i fall
o’ knees
shall crash as mortar shells
eyes rolling as death
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awesome inspiring write My Valiant Soul
i Love the style you brought to this
well penned.
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Your lines are brilliant.
I wonder how your words can move one’s imagination.
Thank you for sharing this.
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no problem, i Love getting inspired by others work and pieces to create and build. so thank you for the killer write.
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You are just being real. No judging.
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And that is what we should be always!
So many thanks to you for this true analysis.
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True. The essence of poetry. Why right blue when all you seeing is red?
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So true!
I am just glad to stumble across your wise words.
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Me too. Learning from you. Your poetry is just wonderful.
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You humble me.
Thank you.
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Why lie…if something is good, is good!
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Wish you 365 days of amazing creativity, Devika! 👍
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Thank you and same to you.
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I’m dealing with it – and I like what I read 🙂 Have a wonderful New Year !!
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Aww. Diana, I am grateful.
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Perfect way to ring in the new year. You can’t have new until you’ve give the “old” a grave.
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Glad you think the same.
Thank you.
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Who cares?
You write from your soul and it makes you happy
You should be proud of your work
Keep guiding the likes of me
Happy new year
And cheers to more dark writings!!!!
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Aww Akeela.
You are so dear to me and I love what you just said.❤️
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Effective use of repetition in this…and dark is how it just is too often.
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Means a lot Victoria.😊
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Dark is beautiful too❤ continue doing you
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Dark is always beautiful!
Yiiee. Thanks K.❤️❤️
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You are powerful with your pen. This is indeed fierce. 🙂 No matter if your new year is dark and unhappy I will pray that with this year coming to an end you will smile. 🙂
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Thank you so much S!
I am truly humbled with your kind words.
Hope the same to you and to your smile.
Much love.
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Love back..! MVS. 🙂
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loved this one too, especially the footnote, I see positivity 🙂
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Ah, thank you for seeing the positivity anyways.
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This left me agaped and craving for more. Dark is beautiful I say, and your brilliance at exhibiting it is truly exceptional.
Much love!
❤️❤️❤️
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Your cravings shall be satisfied as I write further dark verses.
Thank you C, for all your pure love.❤️
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❤️🤗❤️
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