Like fresh breaths and cinnamon aroma
I wrapped your almond curve of palms,
preserving it into my oceanic eyes
Monsoon lilies. Iterative Petrichors.
I swallowed your words,an Orion of kisses
Only to know you will chop the slices of apple,
bit by bit
Smudging the sweetness, smudging the rhythms,
smudging my dreams.
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A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
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Sounds heavenly.
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Thank you!
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You are Welcome 👧💛
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Great post, just what I needed to call it a day
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Iterative petrichors…..woww..such a beautiful phrase.I can really imagine how sensuous it is.You make us go through the situation with your words..
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I am happy you feel so.
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That was beautiful! Once again, you prove that you don’t need a lot of words to create a vivid picture. Very well done! 🙂 I like your poems.
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How flattering your words are.
Much appreciated!
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You are very welcome! Truly, my pleasure!
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This ❤️
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❤️❤️
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Oh! this is gorgeous!
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❤️
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Beautiful!!
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Many thanks.
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Familiar betrayal. Regretful sacrifices. Live’s of us human’s aren’t much different.
It’s really an art to end a poem like this where hope is snatched but you still feel there is always something to live for.
Short and sweet work Devika. Loved It 🙂
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So nice of you to say that.
Thank you dear writer!
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Pleasure is all mine 🙂
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How do you write such beautiful words?
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Imagination, Experience and Solace!
Hope you know that now, Shreyans! You are way too generous, thank you!
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Imagination is brilliant but expressing it in words is incredible. Sometimes I need a dictionary to understand your poems.
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I am all smiles.
🙏
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tell me. how and where do you find these words
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Shreyans, I spend all my time reading and I am a big time logophile.
Words always intrigue and attracts me!
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wish i could do that. But congrats to you. well done
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Thank you!
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This is real talent😍😍😍😍😍 so beautifull
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Thanks!❤️
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Love this
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Gorgeous!
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😊😊
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Nice one!
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Such beautiful words!
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Thankyou girl.
I see you browsing through my work and I am extremely delighted if you are enjoying it so far, which I hope you are.
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I do love your work and I’m enjoying catching up on your writing. A wonderful treat.
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Completely my honour.
Please continue.❤️😊
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Wow! What a beautiful use of juxtaposition in stanzas. The set-up in all that love in the first lines is destroyed by the realization that it’s a ruse, perhaps, and that the person is only out to cut you into bits. Love the analogies and imagery.
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Person cutting me into bits is on point.
Thank you for resonating once again.
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You write this so well, Devika. I am sure you will be stronger for it. You are welcome!
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Thank you.
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You are welcome!
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This is perfect!
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Thank you Shiristi.
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Shirishti*😅💛
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I was trying to be very accurate with your spelling but Damn!!
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Hehe, nevermind 💖
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