I am walking on my own laced path
with frills and throbbing water
Discern the reality, Observe.
Titanium clocks strike the moment of truth
I am as soft as the morning baked bread,
Eyes peeping into your glass carved twists,
Sonder. Hallucination. Expectation. Ashes.
Death shall come eventually,
choking your doors and my windows
What does human fight for, if not humanity?
Coffins: decorated and flowered
I speak veracious lights of thorns,
Concave, convex
Puddle. Soil. Palpitations.
Silence.
© My Valiant Soul
This is eternal truth.Actually even though we won’t walk,death shall walk to us.So we better walk and explore the road of life.And what you said was absolute truth,what are we fighting for if not humanity
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Exploring the roads of life and most importantly exploring our own selves and being a true definition of human to others for death shall come!
Your words are true in that sense. Thank you!
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Humans fight to be human, instead of just being… isn’t there the whole paradox of our life?
Elegant and smooth touch… as always… 🤗🤗🤗🌹
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Yeah that is what I feel.
I am perplexed often and then your wise words make me happy to an extent.
❤️❤️
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🤗🤗🌹🌹🌹
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Loved the ending. 🙂
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Thank you,Harsh!
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Woww!! It is deep.. keep it up!😊
Please check out my new poem:
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Thanks and sure.
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Your welcome. 😀
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Exploring ourselves and exploring life is indeed same because whatever we see and perceive is all in our shell of life.So even though we know about others life,we are indirectly linking our thoughts with our soul which again effects our life
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That’s another story to it which does stand true in certain cases.
Thank you for your insights!
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Death is a certainty, but why wait for it? It will come when it comes. Till then, live, love, write!
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Well, this was tagged as philosophy and philosophy has no ends.
I try to focus on the need of humanity only through my words rather then remorsing death, which I am not afraid of till now.
It’s more about how you treat others and how your live, of course!
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I’m not sure I get you, D. I’ve re-read the poem & your reply, but I guess I’m little thick today!
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No issue.
My point is all about Humanity and not about living and laughing. You certainly will get it if you perhaps have been there.
Death as you said will obviously come and we need to live freely till then. That is a sweet idea and I do not defy it.
Thank you for your thoughts, Kunal!
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That Silence is a brilliant piece of work. Tell me , how do you do it ? Truly , I am curious and amazed at the way you write. Hope you don’t mind. What inspires you ? Your writing is par excellence.
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Oh my Yassy!
Why would it offend me dear? I am just being really weird I feel when it comes to observing life deeply. And my observance makes me ponder and write.
That’s all, dear!
❤️❤️
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Well , I am happy to be reading your work. Take care. Have a nice weekend.
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Oh yes dear friend.
Thank you!❤️
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Beautiful
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Thank you so much.
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Always
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That silence though!
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Thanks, Priya!
😊
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I am silenced! Awestruck! Brilliant!
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Hi there!
I am thankful to hear this kind gesture from you.
Thank you so much!
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Authentic, deep, real and true…
I am amazed
I hope one day I’ll be able to write like you!
Keep up girl!!
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How adorable words you just bestowed!
Thanks!
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In silence we learn of ourselves…i silence we reflect on how we connect with others…in silence we end our days in this world. Your words speak of the truth: we need always be cognizant what we share the world with others and to show the best sides of our humanity for we all meet death the same way. I love how you use form in this piece to show your final sentiment and leaving silence, alone at the end, allows us to absorb it’s eternity.
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That’s a nice add on I must say.
Your words are wise and amazing as always.
Thank you tons for this !
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I am happy to have been able to add on. Your words always take me in new directions. They are gems in the rocks of life. You are always welcome!
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Intriguing journey. Stunning ending. 🖤
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Means a lot from you Venessa!😊
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I’m honoured you think so! ❤
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❤️
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