“Perhaps when you will leave, you will take something of mine: chestnuts, roses or a surety of roots or boats that I wanted with you, comrade”— Pablo Neruda
I doubt the incubation of turgescent moment
where my hands might be swollen
and your tongue all opaque,
I do not wish a lush firmament
or kisses of holy verses,
For I crave is the skin and pores
and countless breaths you take
like torrential piquant roses and wine
You rotate into my feverish mollusc body
Like an Equinox, you conquer my susceptible shadow
Walnuts cracking piece by piece,
the susurration sound to be heard
mapping your virile chest and hands
Too many secrets of love to be unveiled tonight
like letters, vintage photographs, Pure breaths.
I crack bit by bit into your wonderous mouth
Detonating into million and million pieces of delicate memory,
And each time, you hear me.
©My Valiant Soul
Amazing poem. The last three lines took my breath away. Very well done!
Thank you for sharing.
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What a great compliment to read.
Thank you so much!
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I am already loving your writing
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I think that the most fascinating thing for me about your blog, apart your incredible capacity of mastering words to capture the essence of feelings, is precisely this indefinite touch of the classic, stylish past that you make relive…
🌹🌹🌹🤗
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This is truly the most beautiful thing that I have come across till date. You really have observed me well friend.
I am all about old wine and old friends!
Vintage defines elegance I believe.
Love you so much!❤️❤️
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It’s also my strong belief… nothing makes me happier than a fine chocolate (with a flute of champagne… let’s be crazy … it’s Christmas..!) and a good old Cary Grant movie…
Cheers to the great old days!!
Me too !! 🌹🌹🌹🤗
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Cary Grant- Charades, my all time fav and Audrey Hepburn’s style and elegance is timeless.
Looks like we have a lot in common to cheer about dear.
So glad to hear this from you, dear writer!
❤️😊
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She’s just timeless…!
I am really lucky to have got to know you a bit… and its just the tip of the iceberg… 😉😄🤗🌹
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Haha sure darling!
You have a great day ahead.❤️
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Thank you! You too! 🌹🤗
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😊❤️
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Breathtaking! You have a magical way with your words.
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Hey, Rulla!
Thank you for your beautiful words dearie!
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You’re welcome!🌹 your work is an inspiration for many, including me ♥️
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Okay, I might shed a tear or two.
Thank you love. Means a lot.🙏❤️
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Happy tears, I hope! You’re welcome sweets. Continue writing and shining 📝✨
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Always!❤️❤️
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This speaks of a timeless love, of both nostalgia and hope! Beautifully expressed. 💜
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Yiee!
Enchanted to know you loved it.
😊😊
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I did, as usual! 💜
I noticed your avatar changed. What are you reading?
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It’s an old pic and now hard to tell.
Must be “The wuthering Heights”..I guess.
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I’ve actually never read that! ☺️ I bought it a couple months ago and it’s sitting in the stack.
Have a lovely weekend!
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Haha. It did sit on my stack too for a long time but eventually I cleaned the dust from the book!
Love to you.
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💜
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This is spell binding. The love that was. The love that still is.
I wish I had it too. The love.
Your words are amazing and astonishing ❤️
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Hey, looking your awesome poetry I thought you are still happily in love.
I hope things are fine lovely Priya!
And I truly thank you for your piquant feedback.❤️
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Oh that, those are memory lanes I often visit. Yes I am still in love, The one I Do is not there though.
You are amazing as always 💛
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Well, I wish nothing but happiness to you dear.
So much love to you!😊
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Thank you D!
Love ❤️
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Stealth
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Thanks!
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This is awesome! ❤️❤️❤️
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I love the picture and your poem goes well. I am old fashion and write poetry often with the idea of reading it to my wife. I love the serenity of it! Very beautiful!
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I understand the depth of true love for I am lucky to have it to myself.
You reading poems to your wife is such a sweet gesture!
Peace to you, always!
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I have it too! 😉 Thank and peace to you as well.
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Beautiful poem!
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🙏🙏
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Those last lines though😍😍
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Thank you love.😊
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Most welcome
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So beautiful. I just love your poetry.
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You are one kind soul.
Many thanks to you! 🙏
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Beautiful!
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Many thanks!
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nice…
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Thank you.
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You are welcome…:-)
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inspiringdude.wordpress.com if you find something intrusting then Don’t Forget to follow my Blog…:-)
Keep in touch…:-)
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Oh my gosh..😭.How can you write that wonderfully.My favorite line is ” I crave for the skin and countless breath you take,”this is so sensuous.And you used lot of vocabulary.The interesting thing about your poems are you make me travel through the poem with imagination,but in between journey you throw some interesting words,And knowing that too also gives pleasure.And after that again I read the line,them again I feel wonderful about your poetic talent.
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Exactly! There is a journey of love and the journey to cherish Literature as you say.
Your comment always cherishes me up and motivates me further.
Thank you Kalyan for such an amazing feedback each time.
Have a great day ahead!
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Same to you devika.
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Often people who use a prodigious lexicon can come across as verbose & didactic, but you orchestrate the words to cater for every reader, by turning it into music.
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I am glad I am not being monotonously verbose when it comes to words.
Thank you, sincerely!
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I agree with this wonderful comment 🙂
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Aww.
Thank you. ❤️
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You are most welcome!
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Your creations are mind boggling!! While reading, the breath stops and the time slows down.. fantabulous!👌👌👌👌👌😊
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What is sought is to be totally devoured. Forget the kisses, just come and take me. I love the imagery you employ here.
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Thank you so much.
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Breathtaking! Thank you!!
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Thank you so much.
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