Pull me closer to your diamond skin
a place that eats all my molested scars,
in the walls of books and poetry
you shall be my muse, the other half.
of my upcoming poetic line, upcoming splinters of ice,
we make love castles,amidst the dirt hanging like spider web,
Precise knots of commitment are the strongest.
Skin:a reverie of splashing memory,
Something that your lips eat daily.
Turn by turn, inch by inch
we mark each other’s soul
creating geometry, defeating geography.
My collarbone is star dust today,
Ebullient scents from your whisky eyes
expand my artless poetry,
like the writings scribbled onto my library walls,
pink, orange, brown.
Infinite, Indelible.
– my valiant soul
P.s_- To my love, my constant.
Amazing !
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Means a lot. Thank you!
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😊
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That’s beautiful
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Thank you so much.
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Anytime
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creating geometry, defeating geography. One of favourite lines. Amazing work.
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Glad you liked my lines.
As always, thank you brother.
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Sister as always it was my pleasure.
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So many thanks.
Peace to you!
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Walaikum As Salam, (may God bestow the peace onto you too) 😊😊
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Sensational it is….!!!…..
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Thanks my dear S!
Have a nice day ahead.❤️
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You too dear D!
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This is one of those poems that makes you sigh, and melt into a puddle of love-struck goo. Beautiful, dear poet.
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Dear Adaria,
You are way too kind to say so.
Love to you!
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I love love reading it although i missed so much from your page in last few days but this one is beautiful on feelings & somewhere touching to heart👌👌📝
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You can always come back and dive in.
Thank you though for your constant thoughts!
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It is always a pleasure dive in to your work as it has lot more to learn & inspire to write beautiful.
Keep writing!
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Very salacious I think
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How sweet!
Thank you so much.
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Thank you.
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Dejection with a sensational hue and a charming crescendo
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What a stunning tribute to your love! Gorgeous.
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Thank you for noticing that finally.
That makes me happy now!
Honoured I am, Venessa!😊
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The pleasure is all mine! 🙂
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❤️❤️
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I’d be jealous if i were a guy haha! Amazing as always
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❤️❤️
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Amazing..
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Thank you so much.
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Another beautiful work of art. Your love, your constant is blessed to have you.
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You make me smile always.
Thank you sir.
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You are so welcome.
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Wow..again.Yesterday you used ANTI OXIDANT.That’s a chemical term.Today you used geometry and geography..And that’s my favorite line of all,” creating gentry by defeating geography..waaah..fida hogaya.And ” you are my upcoming poetic line”,this is classic.it’s deep and romantic.
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I am thrilled always to hear from you.
You are one of my genuine readers and I really thank you for that.
Glad you liked the lines here. Means so much.
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I always like your lines.You never disappoint.You always set the poetic standards high.And your poems are soo high like clouds difficult to catch but beautiful to read and watch.
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You can definitely catch the lines if you savour them and mix it up in your spines.
Well, this is what I do when I read poetry.
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That’s what I am trying to learn from you.Mainly vocabulary.And imagination
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Honoured!
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When people talk about lovers as muses, I remember a party where a poetry friend met one of my prose writing friends, both women, and the poetry friend asked my prose friend what the women in my novels were like, thinking she was going to get dirt on me. She was shocked when my prose friend said, “They kick ass!” And then I realized that my positive and negative emotions were being channeled into two different mediums of expression.
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Amazing!!
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Thank you so much!
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It’s so positive, the tone of this poem. Ebullient whiffs of love seems to have expanded the artful poetry…
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Often you will find positive poetry too on my blog.
Thank you though!
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Wow! This is incredibly beautiful! What you can paint with words is just amazing!
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Thank you kind heart.❤️
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All my pleasure always!
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Damn beautifull not one or two but the whole this is just beautifull😍❤
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Aww, sweetie.
Thank you.❤️
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Wow! What a passionate analogy for shared love. This is brilliant, Devika. I could feel each of you caressing each other like one would caress the spine or familiar pages of a favorite book. I love, too, your use of the library motif. You are so creative and unique: that’s why your work stands out!
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what to say!!!!!! just beautiful….
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Thanks a lot.
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you’re welcome dear
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Absolutely stunning. ❤️. So talented
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Thanks dear one!
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Fills that existential void with a plug too big that it seems as though struggle was but a figment of ones imagination. Thanks for sharing.
Please tell me what you think of my poem fellow romantic.
https://turtleg2.wordpress.com/2017/12/27/dirty-labour/
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Ooh very seductive! Check out my poetry https://wp.me/p9t3QW-4o
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Lovely.
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Thank you.😊
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How mesmerising!
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Thank you Isha.
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Really nice !
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Thank you.
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Nice one, I really enjoy the different words you utilize throughout your poem.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
Thanks!
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Ebullient is my new favorite word!
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Haha. Thanks sweetie!❤️
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How much does your poetry chapbook cost in US currency, do you happen to know? It said 208 but I think that was foreign!
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It would cost near about that only!
I am thankful you considered of having a look.😊
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This is stunningly beautiful, I’ve had to read through it a few times because it’s tugged at my heart’s strings! To find a love like this would be a dream, someone to be my constant ❤
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This is really beautiful. You have an amazing use of imagery!
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Means so much.
Thank you!
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