
I have detached my cellophane dreams with your cold shiverings
Sustenance to moments invite a vaporizing acceptance
My breaths carve my bones as I count the stars,
Hopes can be delusional, hope can be aimless.
It only moulds the opening of my bosom
where a stack of anti-oxidant hid.
The penumbra of opaque sunrays never lie, it portends a fact.
Under the quietness of my mole, a layer of satisfaction arise
Seepage, Integration, Addition.
My skin kisses my lips, I sit and watch the pervasive love
Inside the language of gods, a clock of soft murmur arise
Trusting the humans once again,
trusting the pillow talks again and again.
Even though I had to look up the word “penumbra” *winks*, I thought that was very beautiful!
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I am thankful you took the pains for that.
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Not at all a pain. It was a privilege. I enjoy your writing very much!
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Thank you.
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Beautiful. ☺🌹🥀💛
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Thank you.
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Is that your picture valiant?
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No, Pinterest.
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Wonderful poem !
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Nice to hear your kind words, always.
Peace to you!
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beautiful poem
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Thank you dear.
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That’s a beautiful post
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Honoured to hear your gracious words!
Means a lot.
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My pleasure.
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Great poem.
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Thank you kind soul.
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gorgeous imagery, love it!
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Hearing this from you is really over whelming to me.
So thankful I am to you!
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You are welcome and most deserving! You write brilliant poetry
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Oh wow! You just made my day.
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🙂
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Bosom,penumbra,seepage,cellophane.I prefer you as a human dictionary.Thanks for increasing vocabulary through hour beautiful poems.And that anti oxidant line you wrote is very beautiful.loved it .’Breath carving bone’..nice one The only thing u didn’t get is language of gods??? It’s it sixth sense speaking to you which only we can understand
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Language of gods -It’s something that is still a secret, mystery and so much more.
And totally up to a reader’s mind as to how to knit it further.
I am really humbled to hear your flattering words.
Thank you so much!
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I always feel you like you are my teacher.I am learning a lot from you.Someday I will try to write like you..atleast 80 percent of you
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It’s an honour if you consider me as an inspiration. I am all tears and humbled now.
Thank you so much for this.
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H Oh my god seriously..sorry for that..I don’t want to make you feel soo emotional.Mad I am not telling these things to just impress or satisfy your ego.This is what I feel.I really want to write like you.it’s not joke.I always think of different things in creative way,but don’t know how to put it in right words.And sometimes I am tired of routine imagination.you increased my imaginary limits.When I read ,I learn how we can think soo deeply by correlating universe,body,nature ,surroundings,psychology,personality etc.
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That is tear of happiness.
I am pleased my poetry can move you that much. You can always come and cherish my work.
It would mean a lot.
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This all came from bottom of my heart.I called you as teacher because real teacher teach you something with enjoyment.I am learning things by enjoying.
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So sweet of you.
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Vivid imagery here!
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Thank you dear.
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Nice poem!
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Thank you.
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no problem at all
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My breaths carve my bones as I count the stars, – Words that remained with me while the rest is a feeling. So beautiful always!!
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Thank you dear friend.
I recently dropped a comment on your latest post but looks like it did not state my name.
Anyway, stay happy beautiful!❤️
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You are welcome 🙂
I got your second comment with name Devika to identify you. I replied with my email yogasaar@gmail.com.
I will be going on a break from this weekend for a week or so. If you don’t get a reply from me please know that I will do so at the earliest after returning from my vacation. You have an amazing time!
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“my breaths carves my bones as I count the stars” – so evocative. I’ll see these words as I count the stars tonight.
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Thank you so much for all the reads ❤️
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When we’ve been wronged by another it is difficult to learn to trust again. Our willingness to allow another to come close becomes sepia toned, yellowing in our minds as we struggle to let them in. Again, you apply impeccable use of imagery and figurative language to make this point.
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I love your work!
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