Forbid me from not inviting you to the dinner tonight,
The reservations are kept clean and precise
We shall make Spaghetti Arrabiata and will murmur talks.
Talks about new locality, a lamenting voice of new priests doing exorcism
Surrounding my pesky air, claps and thunder shall be mixed in your wine
A charcoal dust will caress your cheekbones, piquant games of truth and dare
A memoir, a brandishing clamour of naked bodies will dance
Time teaches time about the modals of life
and human bites time again and again.
I scream inch by inch like the wing of sparrow (Hush, hush, hush)
Needles revolve, this golden sundial stands frozen
Some say the truth, others are clowns well decorated in their own pits.
Forbid me from not inviting you to the dinner tonight.
-My Valiant Soul
Well done 👍
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Thank you kind soul!
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You are so good.
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Thank you kind Yassy!❤
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Welcome 💜💖
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Oh my dear god, this.. wow. I loved this poem so much. Written beautifully, I must say.
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Adaria!
I am really grateful for your observation here.
Means a lot!😊
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I enjoy your work, and you are now forbidden 😊💛
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Means a lot sir!
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Good, it comes from the heart 😊
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This is a brilliant piece! I love it!
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So glad to hear from you love.😊
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❤
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Great imagery. Clever poem
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Thank you so much for your kind read!
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Stunning!!
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Hi Angela!
Thank you so much for dropping by sweetheart. Hope you are doing great!😊
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My pleasure! I love reading you. I’m well, thank you, and I hope you are, too. 💜
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So many hidden meanings and “substance” 😉 Very pretty and very well done.
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For hidden meaning I have decoded only a part of our society and its hypocrisy.
I am sure you see many more treasures behind!
Thank you for your wonderful feedback.
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I don’t even think I have decoded a part, lol. Though as of late I have found a kind soul or two. The hazard of it, is are they?
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☺👍🌹🥀Lovely.
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Thankyou.
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I loved, it is a very enjoyable reading and the picture is perfect! : )
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Nice
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Clever and insightful
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Thanks Braeden!
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Welcome
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Some say the truth, others are clowns well decorated in their own pins…
That line got me hooked,
nice piece, like always
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Aww, Akeela!
Thank you so much for reading my poetry.
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I simply love your pieces, Honestly
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You know you are a darling dear one!
😊
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Haha, Thank you
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Your life is your own banquet… choose what to eat and who you share with…
🤗
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Thanks for that.😊
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My pleasure to read you!
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Wonderful, really wonderful.
It was like a sing song melody.
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Hi M!
It has been long since I heard from you!
Hope you are well and thank you for paying a read to my work.😊
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Forbid me from not losing myself in your artistery./p>
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It’s all my honour.
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Sometimes dining alone is preferred when those clowns have shown themselves for who they really are. Great poetry, Devika!
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