Infront of me I see a stack of leaves,
dwindling in the joyous cool breeze
The neem tree singing its prayer,
A prayer to soothe my skin.
The petals of pink orchid thrum the formidable chants of love,
I listen and absorb the essence into my cloud-like body.
I hear whistles of raindrops, I hear the whirling of thunders declaring a palpitation.
Throbbing of earth, romancing of rains with the parched earth.
Blooming, blooming, blooming.
Birds perching on my window heart.
I hear my sheeny cracks of bone,
Waving, twirling to declare
An emotion, a feeling, isn’t it the same?
My thighs throb, flowing in the air among the glossy grass.
Can you stop my this flow?
Invincible I will become.
Wow MVS, loved it!
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Glad you loved it.
Thank you so much!
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Whao! I love this.
Invincible you’ll become.
But as for me, invincible I am😃
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Thank you, kindly!
I am sure you are invincible and so am I.
At times, we need to shout it loud, I guess!
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Ahaha! Right yeah!
When we shout it loud it stays longer with us.
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And now you know.
Thank you for stopping by my post.
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Invincible….I somehow love this word. And this piece is just fantastic, D ! A bit different too from most of your other poems, I guess ?
I really missed reading your work. Was down with viral past some daya and have just recovered. Hope you have the smile from our last exchange intact. Here’s sending you some more. 😊😊
Much love !
💓💓💓
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Oh, my dear Chhaya. You are such a lovely soul.
My poems are mainly about women self-believe and power or may be I am wrong?
Anyway, I am glad you enjoyed this.
Hope you are well now. I know, this changing season can be pretty harsh on us. Take care dear friend and you are welcome to read my poetries anytime you wish as I will hop onto yours now.:)
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Oh yes, this changing season. I am better now. Thanks ! 😊
Of course your poems are always quite motivational and carry deep sense of inherent strength that women have. This one I found a little different in terms of the style of writing I guess. The imagery and representation here are more substantive and bear close reflections of nature in its visualization, and I really loved that.
Haha…you wouldn’t find much on my blog. I couldn’t write much worth sharing lately. 😁
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You make me smile as you know it.
I am sure there must be something to love about your blog, you never disappoint me especially.
But you need to take proper care ,first!:)
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Your poetry is invisible!!!!
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Invincible or invisible dear?
I am worried now.:)
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Invincible, sorry typo error
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And I thought My poems are invisible and I was afraid. lol
Thank you, my sweet friend!:)
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I am sorry sweetie.
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Oh please Yassy, don’t be.
I was just kidding. I know that can happen with autocorrect often.
❤❤
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🤗🤗😘😘😘🙋🏻
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Haha…you found something there I guess, let me check ! And yes, I am taking care. Thanks ! 💟💟
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☺☺
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I love the take, I’d love to be invincible for once 🙂
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You already are friend.:)
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That was so lovely of you to say 🙂
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Great post !! I just loved it 😊
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Thank you.
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You are welcome
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Awesome poem!
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So much thanks to you for paying a read.
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Your very welcome my fellow poet!
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Is this poem different from your others? I felt so. Loved it! The feeling progressed from delicate beautiful to powerful beautiful 🙂
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You think that too? Well good for me then. :)☺
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🙂
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Gosh! I really missed reading your work. This poem rings true brilliance from your very own heart and soul. You are such a talented writer. I am so proud of you and very excellent writing my friend. 🙂
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That is the sweetest comment i read so far. You are wonderful in your own ways and so I am thrilled to hear this from a writer like you.
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I’m always happy to show strong support to my writer friends…and it makes me happy to read such brilliant work. 🙂
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It’s amazing where a bunch of leaves can take a writer. I like where this piece ended up. Nicely done, MS!
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So true. Thank you for showering your kind words once again.
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You are most welcome.
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The day seems to be rolling good today. First I wrote something I really am proud about and now this piece of work. Sweet work Devika. Loved It 🙂
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Happy for you!
And thankyou for showering your sweet words.
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What you write is so Beautiful. ⚘⚘
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Aww it gave such a soothing feel. ❤️
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I am happy to know that!😊
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Love this
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Thankyou!
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I k ow I’ve read and commented before, but my words did not do justice to this. I love the change that occurs once the essence of those leaves and flowers are absorbed by your body, romancing your soul and making it come to life. One can see you blooming beneath the sweet rain and I love the image of a bird sitting on your heart window. It tells me you are open to love for all things that bring your inner beauty to the surface. I also love how your capture the movement of passion within your thighs. Reading this again felt like bathing in that warm rain. Your writing is beyond beautiful! 😊
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I knew you had commented on this but doing that all over again shows what an amazing soul you truly are!
All the images are well expressed by you in a dulcet manner and truly speaking my heart out.
Your words are always melodious to my li’l heart and I stand humbled to you as always!
Thankyou, Alex!
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Awww, your words make me smile and warm the heart, Devika. I had to leave something of value on such a beautiful poem. You are truly welcome!!!
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Completely my honour to have you read!🙏
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Am truly blessed! 🙂
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sometimes
sometimes like
stars in a rambling sky
our thoughts are light
scattered light
circling the world
circling the universe
until they meet
and merge
it is at these times
these rare times
that all our thoughts
align and we see
that things like
life and time
have order
we have clarity
I have no doubt you will become invincible Devika.
Have a nice day star diamond.
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Thankyou, Kashyap!
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Loving is!
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Someone told me that
Love is the most beautiful thing in the world 😊
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But it is not mutual, you know that.
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See it for yourself!
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Where
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Cannot help !
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I did.
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You can ask the person about it who has nominated you.
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I know you !
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Thats good!
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Stunning as always. This line is particularly beautiful “The petals of pink orchid thrum the formidable chants of love”. So lovely! x
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Aww.
Thankyou love.
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The imagery you create with your words is just amazing!!!!
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I am really humbled my dear.😊
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So fresh & lovely lines. I read it again to feel beauty of nature & your words.
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You can always jump back here whenever you feel chaotic.
😊😊
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Sure Devika…..I prefer to read your poetry at leisure so that I can fully enjoy diversity of your writing.
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And dear that makes me honoured.😊
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