In the encapsulating shimmers of prodigious beautiful skins,
I am a traveller to time zone of your dewy skin
As the geometrical curves make my heart merry,
I count the ways of savouring your skin bites
like fine red sharp thread, threads of love
In the windowpane, I venerate you as my sun,
the Usher of sparkling twilight disguised
as your particle.
Half dawn, half dusk,
your skin is a beautiful myth.
The blithe seaside waves inferior to your footsteps
conjure my eyelids with your memories,
And I feel pepper, salt and sugar.
Your honeysuckle orchid calves
pay reverence to my naked skin.
I breathe the last night fallen star,
scaring myself like your texture
And so I am a basket of infinite part of you.
I am the other you.
-My Valiant Soul
A seductively beautiful concoction indeed 😍😍
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Hi my lovely friend!
Thank you so much for this.
Much love.😊
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😘😘😘
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“I am the other you” . Love is all here in your words. You don’t write you spread love. And it’s magic.
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You have a deep insight to understand the theory of love and oneness I believe , and that’s itself a magic.
Thank you so much for loving this.
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I just can say I have loved deep from the heart. 💞💞 You create magic with your words .
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Uniquely Beautiful My Valiant Soul, you have captured the essence. And it smells sweet as honey & velvet.
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That’s an excellent mixture!
Much thanks
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No problem. I love to read your posts, I even look forward to each new addition.
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Deeply evocative. Beautifully done.
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Thanks dear!:)
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As always..it’s seductive..you mastered this..but how??
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Thank you for that!
I did not master anything but honored to hear that.
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You are welcome,how do you know meaning of lot of classic English,do you search And write or you already knew
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Search and write? Ok so I do not have that spare time now.
I am a big time Logophile you might say.
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Then you are really master..
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Oh, thanks yet again!
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No mention..master
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Haha!
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Beautiful… sensual… breathtaking…and so vividly passionate!!!
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Your words are like precious gem.😊
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🙂
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I am a basket of infinite part of you.
I am the other you.
This is beyond gorgeous …a feeling, just a feeling that is so exquisitely captured by you in words.
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You feel it for you have a humble heart to know the warmth.
Thankyou PD for your beautiful remarks.
Much love!
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My pleasure and privilege really 🙂
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This is gorgeous 💖
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Thankyou.😊
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You’re most welcome 🦄🌈
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Your ability to use the perfect string of words to create masterpieces is amazing! Well done!
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Aww, that is really heart touching Floral!
You are so sweet.❤
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It’s dope love it especially
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Thanks
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Made me drool . So salacious and lovely
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I am immensely thankful for your gracious words.
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Just beautiful 🙂
Keep going
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So happy to hear your delightful words.
Thankyou for the motivation, Ben!
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How do you come up with so many polite ways to say, “Thank you”? That’s amazing!
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It’s a talent, I believe!
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Oh wow! This was lovely.
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Thank you my lovely M!
Have a good night.😊
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Becoming one – well-said in your unique way, Devika. Falling in love really does create a concoction of flavours.
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Thank you so much for your words.
You know they are precious!!
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You are most welcome!
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Just👌👌👌👌
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❤❤
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Goodnight 💗💗💗💗💗
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So evocative and well penned 😀
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Thankyou so much.
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This is such a sensual and sensorial write. I was transported. You weaved in gorgeously unique expressions “encapsulating shimmers”, ” threads of love”, and powerful lines “I conjure my eyelids with your memory” ❤ how hauntingly accurate!
"I breathe the last night fallen star" how poetic and romantic.
I was conquered by the last two lines, which are simply enchanting. "And so I am a basket of infinite part of you./ I am the other you."
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So glad to know you acknowledged it with deeper insights and adored it.
Thanks for appreciating my imagery and lines dear, means a lot!:)
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I did! Every word of it! There is so much talent in you! ❤️
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Must I say I am blushing now!😊
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💕
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Sensual & passionate poetry. Just beautiful
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😊😊
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Sensual… pure pleasure to read! Piqued my senses… you did! Love it!
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I missed reading your lovely comments so much.
Glad to have you back.😊
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I love reading your write-ups. Happy to be back! 🙂
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So am I!😊
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Hi,
My blog has been shifted to self hosted site with a new name ‘Atrangi Zindagi Ka safar- celebrating’ life https://atrangizindagieksafar.com/
please follow me there,
‘atrangizindagieksafar’ is defunct now
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The beauty of love. Very well written. This is lovely, I absolutely adore it.
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You are lovely too dear!😊
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❤❤
A very beautiful write.
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Wowed as always…lot to learn
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You are my one of the dearest reader.
Thankyou.
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Thanks a lot…I forgot your name
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Don’t worry. Name is not important.
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Haha..I know..just I have to appreciate with some noun na
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And the noun is MVS!
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You would have given your full name in letters,than telling the same WordPress name
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That’s because people generally address me like that.
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When I say it feel like I am speaking with my own soul..for example..you are amazing my valiant soul..see I am boosting myself
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Very well written and intense!
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Thankyou for your charming words.
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Your welcome
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Your strongest line Devika summarizes and ends the poem.
I am the other you.
And captures well when 2 hearts truly beat as one.
It’s a beautiful piece.
Here’s to the dusk that leads to your falling star…
evidence
of an open heart
that bleeds across
the open sky like
a sunset that is so
alone her own beauty
she cannot know
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Pheww…sensational & beautiful, “I am the other you” says it all.Magical poetry with essence of love & ingredients of feelings.Keep writing & inspiring to write classicals👌📝😇
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Wow!
Your comment made me exhilirated.
Thankyou so much for your sincere reads.🙏
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Beautifully written! Simply amazing 🙂
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Thankyou dear.
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Gorgeous poem I love the lyrical flow to it too
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