Like a distinctive shine, my heart palpitates for your convex smile,
the dewy lips romancing with a shooting star,
the prodigious forest inside my body receives a gust of fragrance,
your beatific touch that glitters my waistline, oh, my man!
Between lips and parched lips, resides a mystical cacophony
yarning a crown of butterflies to decorate my atlas of body
to receive the markings that spread through my milky breast
where the darkness vanishes in the monotony of time,
I smell my bed sheet, the spots you rocked me,
clinging on the jasmine night,
that gave an ephemeral shake, a tremor to our naked souls.
A thunder I produced, inside my poppy finger-nails
where I captured your aroma,
as a pearl of delight: my necklace
I want your immortal touch inside the folds of my skin,
sucking my tongue
residing in the interiors of my temple shaped body,
I have known moist cities and pale humans
putting a slumber to my desire,
And snickering to my crooked jawline
where the goddess even hides in cold evenings.
I have seen sanity, insanity.
I have been tattooed with thorns of roses
wrapped around my neck, suffocating, killing, devastating.
And here I survive in your crisp prism blurry image
turning around the previous thorns as a cultivated seed.
I left a comment and WordPress ate it lol. I’ll try again.
Another WOW! Every word blends perfectly with the next. You, my friend, are an amazing writer! ❤️
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WordPress is giving a lot of glitches off lately!
Anyway, thank you kind soul for cherishing my words.
Much love to you Dorinda.❤
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Yes, the happiness engineers must not be too happy lol Always my pleasure to read your words. Much love right back at you, my friend ❤
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Hehe that’s true perhaps!
Have a good day ahead, D!:)
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You, too, D! 🙂
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Really amazing writer nice poem
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Once again, much thanks to your sincere reads.
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Yeah, that too!
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This is something what is very beautifully crafted. Wonderful!
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And that means everything to me now dear Vandana.
Thank you so much for your love.
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Really meaningful as poetical justice flow in each line….
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Aww, I am really honoured now.
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Beautiful as always!!! This one really tugged on my emotions… felt every expression in your words 🙂
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I am so thrilled to learn that.
Thank you for reading my work.
Much love.:)
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Welcome 🙂
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That was unbelievable. Really hot, really evocative, love how you set up what was once a source of such incredible pleasure inevitably became the source of pain, but created the necessary seeds of change and growth. An all encompassing poem!
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Thank you for taking out your time to read my work and cherishing it equally.It means a lot as you liked the phases descibed in this.
Much thanks to you.
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You’re most welcome. 👌🏽👌🏽
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Absolutely amazing!
Another one you’ve knocked right out of the park
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It’s nice to know you liked this poetry Brett!
Much thanks yet again.
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Very amazing. Such pulsating rhythm!
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Thank you for your beautiful words once again PD!
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Always my pleasure 🙂
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Sounds like you have emerged from your rebirth exactly where you need to be.
Crown of butterflies…Queen of Swords…freedom of thought and active intellect.
Tattooed with thorns of roses, but turned around as light is broken and changed by a prism to create
cultivated seeds
with a wedge of glass
we split the rainbow
separate colors
into organized rows
of light
they stack
like dominoes
ready to topple
should we turn the lens
sounds like you are ready to turn the lens
What a beautiful and tasteful piece of erotica.
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I loved how your displayed your imagery over here. ‘We split the rainbow’ is such a powerful yet adorable line.
Thank you for adorning my work with your amazing words, Forrest!
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One of my favorite pieces of your work… which reminds us… soulmates does not mean that people are perfectly matched, so that no problems or friction ever occurs. It means they are perfectly matched to solve these problems or friction.
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Simply wonderful!
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Thank you M!:)
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This is so chocked full of beautiful lines and images. We place ourselves into the bosom of the Earth so we may be held and caressed but that Earth could be us or it could be our lovers. I love the opening lines so much because it reminds me of an early sunrise, the sun with its convex smile upon the land. It fits nicely with the waking forest inside you as that final shooting star meets the dewy morning glimmer which allows flowers to open up and expel their scents. The way you twist words to melt them into something erotic and evocative is stunning. One could hardly tell if it was the passions of building ecstasy between two lovers or the day draping itself over Mother Earth. All in all, this is one of my favourites of yours because it holds a huge weight of hope in its lines that even when those thorns suffocate, the seeds falling shall germinate, take root and grow to be something beautiful. Just like in the split second of orgasm, the heart stops and we find ourselves on death’s doorstep, the seeds deposited create new life. Absolutely stunning, MVS!
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Yes, this was in my spam amongst others. Sorry for that and thank you for this detailed feedback.
I love how you connected my opening line with a beautiful sunrise as it gives so much character to my poem.I really appreciate how beautifully you have pointed the minute meanings which otherwise maybe ingnored by a naked eye!
Thank you sincerely for praising my imagery and its twist that satisfies me.
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You are most welcome, MVS.
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Amazing stuff!
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Thank you, kindly!
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Wow. I am impressed. If I didn’t seem so committed to my own terrible poetry I would have to quit and just follow yours. What is with India and these beautiful words I keep finding…
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I cherish your blog pretty well and adore your writings.
This is you being extremely kind to such words, we Indian’s do produce a couple of genius poets so thank you so much.
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So it seems. My favorite poem is the Cinnamon Peeler by an Englishman whose name I can’t quite remember. I loved it then but cherish it now.
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This is awesome.
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Thank you dear friend!
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Welcome 😊😊
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I adore this. Captivating imagery and flows beautifully. ❤
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Aww thanks Scarlet.:)
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You’re welcome. 🙂
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This is MY favorite piece by you!
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Thankyou so much, Braeden!
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B.E.A.U.T.I.F.U.L P.E.R.F.E.C.T
❤️❤️❤️❤️
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Thankyou, Priya!
😊😊
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You look so gorgeous 😍
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Aha!.
Thankyou my sweetheart.😊
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❤️
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Amazing poem!!!! Love this!!!!
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😊😊
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Wow, this is amazing and very well written!
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Much thanks.
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Your welcome
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😍😍😍💘wowwwwwwww..it’s insanely seductive..my heart started to pound heavily..I mean I can explain about every line you wrote..you showed like its was happening upfront of your eyes…you are awesome
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That means so much to me.
I am really happy to read your words!
Thankyou.
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Always….Lot to learn from you
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Oh, my!
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Oh my….what???
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I am honored
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You deserve that
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You deserve that
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