The hypnotizing air around
And concoction of our wet breaths
This is where my sweet paradise is,
My soothing divine land.
Lost in the woods, dreadful sins are gone.
I bit your skin like unveiling that hidden magic,
I see more of you…
I see more of me…
Oh, your enchanting glory
Cascading on my fierce red lips
Soothing to my body and
I feel a total oblivion.
Rustling leaves, frosting ice
Flamboyant skies hiding a picture of us.
Time heals like spider’s web.
Autumn smirks on the mating of spring.
With every rainbow, I feel the dimensions of your tropical meadow.
With every light, I find my paradise.
_My Valiant Soul
Passionate 😍
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❤❤
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The favourite one is updated with every new one
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Thank you so much sir.
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🙏
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Lovely 👌❤
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No, I know it’s not that good.😐
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Whaaattt??? You are insane…this is sensational writing dear…top notch that too😎😎😎
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Thanks for sharing:)
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Sure.😊
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I just love all of your writing!!!!! Awesome job!!!!
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That’s because you are amazing.❤
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It really is beautiful… u express your thoughts so very… beautiful :)❤❤❤
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Means so much to me.😊
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😊
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This piece makes me happy for you.
So romantic. 🙂
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Thankyou.
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Really beautiful !
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Is it? Thanks for your words.
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Yes beautiful expression of love it is
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A beautiful testament to the paradise created when hearts and souls exist in sync with one another, and of course, in your unique descriptive way.
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You say it so it must be good.
Otherwise I did not think much of it.
Your gracious words always motivates me.
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We are our hardest critics so I understand where you are coming from when you say you did not think much of it. For me, it’s all about capturing a moment or a sentiment and here, you’ve captured something shared between two people and that is beautiful. You are most welcome!
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Alex, your writings are truly beautiful and ai look forward to reading them always and therefore coming a valuable feedback from you means so much.
I really appreciate your reads!
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Thanks. You are most welcome.
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Wow, deep!
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Thanks!
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