poetry

Paradise

The hypnotizing air around
And concoction of our wet breaths
This is where my sweet paradise is,
My soothing divine land.

Lost in the woods, dreadful sins are gone.
I bit your skin like unveiling that hidden magic,
I see more of you…
I see more of me…
Oh, your enchanting glory
Cascading on my fierce red lips
Soothing to my body and
I feel a total oblivion.
Rustling leaves, frosting ice
Flamboyant skies hiding a picture of us.
Time heals like spider’s web.
Autumn smirks on the mating of spring.
With every rainbow, I feel the dimensions of your tropical meadow.
With every light, I find my paradise.

_My Valiant Soul

27 thoughts on “Paradise

  1. A beautiful testament to the paradise created when hearts and souls exist in sync with one another, and of course, in your unique descriptive way.

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      1. We are our hardest critics so I understand where you are coming from when you say you did not think much of it. For me, it’s all about capturing a moment or a sentiment and here, you’ve captured something shared between two people and that is beautiful. You are most welcome!

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