City of parallel lies
with masks, twitches unheard
an intrusion of insects into the skin
the air is eerie.
scratch the masks people,
peel off the under skin
to see blueberries hanging
from your forehead.
In the serene morphic undistilled
waters,
inhale the dewy poetry.
The poetry that lies
inside the innocuous flesh.
The star consumes and spreads the beam.
© My Valiant Soul
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my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
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I am no expert but can recognise class and poise. Clearly evident in yours.
And I have just a thought, a stupid one. Sounded like antidote to blue whale horrors to the skin.
Forgive if I have crossed the line
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Thank you so much for this amazing feedback.
And no, it’s hilarious actually how you saw it.
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Thank you so much. I am actually relieved and happy after hearing your response
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Beautifully crafted
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Thank you!
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The “itch” to obsessively transmit your thoughts into prose is beautifully portrayed…the usage of skin as a vessel between the obvious and the truth underneath is so precise. Once again…stupendous 🌹🌸🌺
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I must say your beautiful thoughts have enhanced the value of my words.
I am so thrilled to have your insights.
Thank you friend!☺
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The pleasure is definitely mine😊
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The pleasure is definitely mine😊
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Exuberant poetry…☺☺
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Great to have you here.
Thank you for reading and giving your feedback. Much appreciated.
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I am not sure but I guess you are describing the lost self in the illusion of lies. But it is remarkable, the way you write. keep up the good work.
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Yes, exactly that is what it is about.
The world and its lies and on the other hand is the skin that needs to be peeled off.
Thank you for dropping by and inspiring.
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wonderfully written..
shreyans
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Your words are so deep & meaningful. We feel every emotions through it. Falling in love with your poetry everyday.
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Bhavana, to see the beauty of my work there needs to be beauty in the eyes of beholder.
Thank you my dear friend!:)
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The truth itches to get out and poetry is the vessel that will transport it. I love the image of blueberries hanging from the forehead. I see the poet bathed in ink, the dewy poetry forming on blank pages as she takes care of that itch. I also love how you use skin as a barrier between what is unknown or even perceived from the outside and what is contained beneath the mask of that skin. Skin plays an important part in much of your poetry as both a transmitter and a barrier. Great writing, Devika!
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The conjecture of skin is well understood by your genius mind.
All the formations are well perceived.
I am flattered to learn your wisdom as always!
Thank you, Alex.
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You are most welcome, Devika.
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Nicely penned
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Much thanks.
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You’re welcome
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You sew the words so intricately. And the meaning. Unmasking the true self. You are marvellous at what you write. I fell in love with your poem.
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My dear, I am speechless sincerely to hear your words.
Must I say its your beautiful heart that feels and connect with my work.
I am really honoured.☺
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You are Amazing one. The lost soul found the valiant one 😘
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Wow! Loved your phrase..”lost soul found the valiant soul”.
Love you sis.☺
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More love your way 😘❤️
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May I know your name sis?☺
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Oh, Priya it is!❤❤
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Aaha you Decipher ☺️ .
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Haha. Writing made me to do!☺
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Wow !
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What a nice remark. Thanks!:)
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🙂
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This is great
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Thankyou.
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Welcome
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I like “The star consumes and spreads the beam.”
It’s a very good line with a strong sense of power within it.
Have a happy Dussehra, Devika.
Respectfully, Forrest
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So nice to hear that!
And thankyou for your warm wishes.
I am glad to learn you know about our festival .
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I love the imagery in this poem! Well done!!!!
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😊😊
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They have value, the words to symbolise the emotion makes them stand out.
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“Parallel lies” reminds me of how often my friends would be dating each other and telling me their different views of what happened.
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