Particles of moonlit still stuck to my body,
Peeling my crestfallen strawberry heart
All that remains is a pool of
mystery, a mauvy shadow,
A baked sunset
with glitters of a half moon eclipse.
©My Valiant Soul
Half-Moon Eclipse
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Particles of moonlit still stuck to my body,
Peeling my crestfallen strawberry heart
All that remains is a pool of
mystery, a mauvy shadow,
A baked sunset
with glitters of a half moon eclipse.
©My Valiant Soul
MY VALIANT SOUL 
As usual I am speechless reading your lines.
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Thank you Y!
This was instant one and you know the feeling.
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Yeah! Definitely!
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☺
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So radiant ❤️
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Thank you for feeling it.
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Deeply beautiful and meaningful!
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Thanks Sanober!☺
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And this allows the heartbroken self to glow in pride of the luminous scars that shine bright as speckled trophies..! 🙂🙂
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You adorned my work with your sparkling words.
Thank you V! You are adorable.❤
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🙂
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I love the opening line, such a great image and description of those lingering particles as morning approaches. Awesome, MVS!
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Thank You Alex. Your opinions are always true and thrilling to read.
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You are most welcome, MVS. You are kind!
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I feel like this is etched in a ruby heart somewhere. Glittering and bejeweling, whilst beguiling words.
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And you are on it.
You can never fail in your wisdom.
Thank you.
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I like your post 😊.
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Whenever I see your post in reader, I can’t stop myself from coming here. Reading your content gives me so much pleasure.
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My dear Bhavana, you just made my day! How can you be so kind and amazing I wonder.
I am deeply thrilled and thankful to you.
Much love.☺
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Much love to you too… Have a great day ahead
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This is dreamy, aerial, colourful, and graphic. A firework made of word particles. I love it!
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You have got something an amazing ability imagery is definitely your strength.
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Thank you so much. Much appreciated!
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This is nice as usual,even though it’s small poem,your imagination us much more bigger.I enjoyed it
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So glad to know, that you admire my imagination for creativity is all that writer has inside!
Thank you so much.
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YOU are welcome…
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Beautiful❤❤
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As you!😊
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You are too kind😘
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This is as sparkling as you 💞
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Aww, my lovely friend!😊
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❤️
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I love the imagery in this poem! Great job!!!!!!!
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Thankyou Floral, you are a beautiful soul.:)
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so intense !
I loved it
– Confused Thoughts
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Nicely penned.
Fewer words but insanely deeper.
Shower your opinions on “www.readnburnblog.wordpress.com”
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Much thanks!
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Wow, I love this.
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Thankyou Brenda.
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so pretty omgg
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Thankyou for your lovely words.
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Wow, I mean WOW!
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So many Wows!
Thank you so much.
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Love the way you assemble each syllable❤you made me fan of your work..💓
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Oh wow.
You must be really a gem of a person to say such beautiful words.
Thanks my dear!:)
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This is pretty beautiful and made up for a really fascinating read 👏
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Thankyou.
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