Wild Star


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That night was like firecracker. Galaxy overloaded with the stardust. The hums of two souls on this bed sheet could be heard above in the oblivion red sky. The music that our touch produced, the chains formed of lust, the golden promises, the congruence of love. That impeccable mystery rocked the spaces above, it rained heavenly like our jocund voices were heard. The smell of your skin mingled with the Celebration flew across, through the fields brushing those mustard crops and to the valley declaring thunderstorms. The collision was into our breaths, into our sighs.

I saw you bitting my tongue. My pink tongue.

My moans took the form of transparent dewdrops, it was a paroxysm of fire and ice, gliding through your sturdy caricature, flowing diligently into your mind. Creating motif. Chemical formula finally lingering your colossal enigma. The intrusive knots of passion.

It was the thumping of our heartbeats, the intoxication of love, the caress of your touch, making me that fragile flower blooming in despair. A lotus. A shadow of your soul dancing on Earth.

P.S -My poem Soul on Soul published on Spill words. You may check my work here.

©My Valiant Soul


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my valiant soul

A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times. Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied. My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others. Curator of Olive Skins.

48 thoughts on “Wild Star”

  1. Your prose is like your poetry, unrestrained by typical, grammatical conventions. I like the unbridled nature of the form and the sensual/passionate imagery. The Celebration of two souls through physical means is well played out here. Nicely done, Devika.

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    1. I am really thankful that you can observe my writing style here. At times, all writers want is to write without knowing tevhniques and manners.
      This came down straight from my that unbridled pen as you say.
      So glad you liked it!

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  2. Congratulations on your being further published Devika.
    You are putting together quite an impressive and well-deserved list of accomplishments.
    Forrest 🙂

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      1. Thank you Devika. As I’ve said and will repeat, I think you are the best writer on here. A compliment from you means a great deal. You have a great week ahead. Forrest

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  3. Sensual and ethereal. The image of souls dancing int he throes of ecstasy is what truly happens when we make love to someone we are in love with. Your words are passionate and come from a deep place where love has been experienced. And, congratulations on being published. Here’s to continued success in the poetry world, you deserve it, my friend!

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      1. I think you need never try for poetry flows from you naturally. You have such a wonderful gift to be able to describe in unique ways, what has been described millions of times by others. You give a fresh voice to many human emotions and I applaud that. It is your uniqueness that makes your work stand out so much. And that, my dear friend, is work worth savouring 🙂 You are always welcome to my feedback as long as you continue to write such beautiful poetry!

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