Through the slices of segmented desire
Where the circumference of my peevish skin expands,
I inhale into the tiny molecules that flourish these numb walls,
Mending a crack,
With a mist of romance,
Point of lust, point of dainty smell of you.
I walk through the ruptures of placcid walls enunciating your presence,
And I peel the rim of this cucumber time zone
Where my legs fall in the abyss of surreal moments of you,
Like clicking of needles, rainwater puddle upon my iris,
Now beaming
As if I were a shadow of your dream.
A dream worth swallowing the darkness,
Just to produce the moon’s composure, a debonair companion.
Wow I love this poem because it touches my heart . u write beautiful
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I am glad if it did.
Much thanks for paying a read to my poem.
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You always write too good and unique
God bless you
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Thanks and wish you the same./p>
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Amazing!
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Hi!
Hope you doing great.
Thanks for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment.:)
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I am π
You are very welcome, I truly find your poetry very exquisite.
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You are a beautiful soul for that reason.
Thank you for your love Pragal(if that’s your name).:)
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π thank you.
Pragalbha is my name, got shortened on this platform. I like PD better π
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You are so gifted with words!!! Literally wow!!!β€
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Oh my! You will give me a tear now girl.
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πyou are brilliant… I am happy I followed your blog… your writings are truly gems to readπ
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Oh, Kim!
Must I say you are a sweet person blessed with a gracious heart to say such humble words. It means a lot!
I am glad too to come across your amazing writings!:)
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Thank uππ
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Sounds like healing and happiness are on the horizon.
βclicking of needlesβ a frighteningly subtle sound.
Just as βcucumber time zoneβ may be an indeterminate time?
Both are commanding imagesβ¦
I suspect there is more to this story.
But as Iβm sure your other readers can attestβ¦
we will all look forward to the next chapter you present us.:)
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The imagery I used was a mixture of both and the rest is upto readers how they perceive it.
You for one, always predict it right.
Thank you Forrest!
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Very nice poem!
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Thank you so much for paying a read.
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Your welcome, and appreciate you doing the same with mine.
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I love the way you relate things with your imagination .
I would like to say magical words with intense emotions .
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Aw, thank you so much for your beautiful words.
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If I were a shadow, I’d sit and observe your mind at work. This is an exquisite piece of writing, MVS, in your unique style. First, let me say, I love the image you selected for this poem – it fits so well with the overall shadowed theme and with the opening lines of ‘through the slices of segmented desire’. Each fold of the blind int he image is in segments so great find, here. Second, I really like how you use the comparison (perhaps) of an abandoned house (or empty room) to the human body to create a shadowed atmosphere in your piece. Third, and as usual, I love your unique descriptions of how the shadow (that pure, undulating desire) surfaces through the walls (or skin) as it runs piping hot through the veins; how it ruptures, causing you to become weak in the knees; how you become the shadow in that dream; and how you are willing to let the darkness consume you just so the moon can compose itself to be a worthy companion. This really is, brilliant poetry, my friend.
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Alex, you have captured my mind in a really perfect way as that is what is hidden in this piece. So glad to know you always resonate with my insights as it means a lot.
I am pleased to know you liked it and loved the imagery once again. Much thanks to you.
Have a great day/night ahead!
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You are most welcome, MVS. My day started wonderfully and this response from you makes the day that much brighter. Have a great evening, my friend π
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Awestruck! Touched my heart somewhere too deep⦠Loved it!
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Love the poem! It sounds beautiful!
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Thank you so much!
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