like colours of star-dust, with pastels shade, devouring my deleterious thoughts or the beatific sparkle in petals of morning sunflower you paint me with the bottle of red wine, the colours splashing on my skin, on my waist till the moonlit drops on my lips, drinking the mystical sweet nectar cracking my nights to make a vivid lacuna A lacuna of fondness, the smell of sheets penetrate into my bones lifting the veil of frozen thoughts, like painting colour on a white jackfruit then bursting the same burst your touch on my forehead, burst your flow on my cheekbones a crackling sound, a music of the symphony Lion devours the she-wolf A fight indeed, or the wild ocean of invincible smell the smell of us breathing, Melody Jingles of star in the galaxy stroking us with quixotic flavours of cupid Puerile streams of river now flowing on my sweet breast on my lips, on my refreshed eye creating a new landscape, a landscape of roses romancing the wine.
firing whole veins
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Thankyou for your kind words!
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these are wild words though
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Thankyou, still.
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Yup fireweed
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Chaotically beautiful wonderfully written…
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“Chaotically beautiful” may I know how is that?
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It is actually the pattern you wrote in…changing the rhythm of thought after every full stop…and that turn to be beautiful in chaos to me…
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Romantic, and the picture goes well too.
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Thankyou.:)
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Very nice “romance” pieces today.
You do “passion” particularly well.
Cheers. Forrest
you could
look into her eyes
and see her soul
naked and exposed
but a woman whole
wrapped in
Egyptian cotton
that in no way could
a thousand threads
per inch conceal
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I simply loved this addon. I am thrilled to hear these beautiful lines.
Glad you could put your amazing words onto my poem as romantic is my genre I believe now.
Thank you, Forrest!
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Respected, Forrest!
I have been noticing that you don’t read my comments on your blog.
I don’t know if it is a glitch or not.
Please check.
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You are such a vivid painter of words. I love the way you attack the senses in your work, bringing them altogether to create a masterpiece that is unique and refreshing. I also believe the repetition is indicative of passion, constantly repeating itself to create this beautifully coloured work. Awesome poetry, MVS!
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That’s so much of love for my work.I am happy you can feel my way of words potrayal a vivid one.Thanks for the beautiful comment.Much appreciated!:)
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You are most welcome 🙂 🙂
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🙂
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🙂 ❤ 🙂
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Just wow 😍
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Thank you A!:)
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your words are the brush… readers emotions and minds are the canvas… and on it, you have painted a most sensual and beautiful picture. As always, I love your work!
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This is such a sweet expression I must say.
Thank you for considering me worth it.☺
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This is really hot! You did it
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This is my old work.
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I notice but you captured what I wanted you to do
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Thank you.
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Thank you 😊
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That means a lot.
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Beautifully dreamy. Loved the way you ended too.
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You know that well as you yourself are marvellous.
Thank you.😊
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Thank you for your awesome thoughts. It’s a refreshing change to read your poetry. I always wanted to read your kind of verses. So I am gleefully happy.
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Now that makes my heart sing all crazy songs!
Your this honour is extremely precious to me, Yassy!:)
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You deserve praise. And sing away my nightingale. Your poetry is our music.
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Haha.
Hugs to you.:)
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🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Your poetry is indeed an entirely new landscape for me, I am always refreshed! I am usually unable to respond in any reflection on your work, I just enjoy the beauty thoroughly.
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Keep satisfying yourself then, dear friend for my poetries will always be at your service.
You motivate me PD!❤
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