Colour my fingertips
vibrant red,
a rainbow of purple and lust.
choke my throat,
smear my lipstick
Hanker my pool of slumber
with your bare embellished shoulders
Invincible like sea-shells.
Poke my balloon of dark stars
to deliver fairy dust
wrapped on my firm breasts
surrounded on my naval
where our galaxy meets,
like the unseen love-making.
You be the Wolf, and I shall be your voice
yearning, sweating
soaked in your periphery,
till the sky evaporates.
©My Valiant Soul
Oh! my!!!
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Thank you Y!
🙂
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You are always welcome 🙂😘😊
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Hugs.😊
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You pen your words so beautifully❤ this piece especially… it ignites thoughts and imagination 🙂
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Just great valiant,
“You be the Wolf, and I shall be your voice”…this sounds beautiful
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Thank you for your valuable words.
I am pleased to know you enjoyed it.
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A most vivid, passionate, sensual, and lustful description of lovemaking from the urgency of ravishing one another to quiet aftermath in which you watch the sun vanish outside closing eyes. As I read I thought of galaxies colliding to create something unique and beautiful. Again, I love the title, your use of colour and the way you weave metaphor and simile throughout. Just beautiful!!!
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That so honest of you. It’s all about savouring each other in the rawest form.
You have surely imbibed my imagieries in the best way possible.
Thamk you so much.
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You are most welcome, Devika. I simply write what I see in your poetry.
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And your observations are great.
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How kind you are, my friend.
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Right back at you.
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Awesome
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Nice to have you yet again.
Thank you.
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Always and your welcome valiant soul!
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You be the wolf nd i shall be ur voice.
Makes wonderful sounds
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I am pleased to hear that.
Thank you.:)
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Yoh got it!
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wow, powerful imagery!
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I am thrilled to hear that.
Thank you!:)
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Devika this is so hot! 🔥
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I tried to make it hot.
Thank you.
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Brilliant poem. I loved the lines. Awesome👌
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Thank you for your beautiful comment.
I am flattered!:)
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Same here. A creative writing 👌
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Love it! ❤
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Hi Lisa!
Thank you for paying a read and appreciating my words.:)
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You are quite welcome, it is always a pleasure! 🙂
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☺
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Very well written!
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Always a pleasure to hear from you.
Thank you!
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Your very welcome!
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