The promise of high tide, the valour of blooming minds
in the blanket of stardust kiss
in the essence of my apron,
I carry thy words in my uptight hair bun
breezing the hopes, the yearning tongue in the air
Like I see a reflection in the consonance of my eyes
The paintings carved in my belly-button
like a deep slumber of a half-slept moon
establishing the prodigious words of skin,
the language of my pink tongue.
I see you as my dream-catcher sprinkling feathers on my soft breasts.
on repetition, you collide with my heart
An Orphic diamond kiss on my eyes.
The daydream is ephemeral for you shall rock
me in the cradle of lavender fields.
As my hair strands say phosphenes chants of you.
This is just W. O. W.
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Thank you dear.
Lot of love.
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Wow โค
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Thank you Sweta!
Your words are kind.:)
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vivid and picture is cool. makes eyes warmth
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Amazing โญ
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Thank you A!
I’m all smiles.:)
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Beautiful imagery. Wonderful expression and very emotional.
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Thank you Veena!
It’s so nice to hear from you.
Wish you a great day ahead.
Much love.:)
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Wow! A picture indeed!
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You never fail to make me smile.:)
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I love the subtle sensuality
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Thank you for stopping by and reading my work.
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Uh of course you’re welcome I’m enthralled and not likely miss anything you post now ๐๐ผ๐
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Wow! You are am amazing person I must say.:)
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Aww thank you I appreciate your perception. You’re an amazing talent imho ๐
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Thank you sir.
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Beautiful dear
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Hi Tanvir.
Lovely to hear from you.:)
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Same here!! Wish a good start again!! Bad to here your account got deleted
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Aah! Trying to move on now.
Thanks for your concern dear.:)
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Most welcome and nice to hear from you
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Lots of love.
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Beautiful dear, really truly capturing.
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You are a sweet soul dear.
I am pleased to know you liked it.:)
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Pleasure darling.
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Like I said you write romance and passion pieces better than I do. In both poems you wrote today, you created very strong โword pictures.โ Images that stay in the readerโs mind long after the reading. In a poem, each word is selected like a jewel. Your selection and arrangement of the jewels today will leave all readers with a smile… and wanting more.
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Even I feel romantic genre is well wriiten by me though I would love to explore all the genres.
Thank you for your appreciation, you adore my work really well.I’m honored.
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I will comment less to keep more appropriate.
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Sorry? Can you be more precise please.
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I did not mean any comparison.
My apologies.I surely meant I am better in romantic genre as you have stated earlier than doing other genres.
I feel sorry if it came out wrong.
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I like the mystical and the nods to classical constructs. Flows well, like it accompanies some faint music, perhaps that from a lyre.Love work as always (and your romantic writing is just as good as your other genre pieces, wonderful and from the heart)
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Oh I am so flattered to hear this from you.Yes this flows like a faint music.
Thank you for letting me know that I am well balanced between the genres.Appreciate it.
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You’re welcome, your pieces are like stumbling across different jewels.
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That really means a lot!
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Awesome!
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Appreciate your feedback.
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A beautiful collection of images in your well-developed and effective writing style. Romantic in its consonance (great word choice here), adhering to your heart’s preference – those chants of a lover. Great writing, MVS.
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Alex, you words are literally so important as it ignites more depth to my work.
I really appreciate you reading all my posts with utter sincerity and patience.
Much thanks!
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You are most welcome, MVS. I really enjoy reading you and will always be honest about how I see it and how it makes me feel. ๐
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Sigh. What beautiful poetry. It gets better and better. I feel lost in these words.
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Oh Yassy! You make my heart blush and cheeks sing.
Thank You so much my dearest!:)
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Beautiful poem and well written!
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So happy to learn that you liked it. Much thanks.
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Your very welcome!
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This line gripped me:
“I see you as my dream-catcher sprinkling feathers on my soft breasts.”
Your writing is a true example of poetic essence and you always bring poetic to its natural sources of healthy healing and the world itself needs more writers like you my friend. Truly, I love what you’ve written here. ๐
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You are kind enough to say that.It really makes me happy to know how deeply my words touched you.
Thank You for this supportive gesture and truly I enjoy your writings as well.
Have a great day ahead.
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Your welcome. My support to others should make their days feel bright, motivated, and positive. ๐
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I adore this poem. The imagery struck a chord with me.
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You are a kind soul to say such kind words.
Thank You so much for stopping by and reading my poem. It means a lot.
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Poets are windows into other worlds. Thank you for opening yours.
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That is so nice of you to say!
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Lovely words and very lovely imagination. You killed it
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Thank You so much.
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So beautiful & sweet . Always curious to know from you “do you select pic first or wordings?…Words flowed so well with your selected pic๐
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Thanks Bhavana!
I personally select the picture first and then try knitting my words.
I am happy you find it lovely.
Much love.:)
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No issue
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