Inside the rim of a bottle
Or outside the grilled window
You poke and churn the mystical hoax
Digesting into the pool of madness
A reverie. A fiction. A ballistic throttle.
A healing iris. A gargantuan of flowing words. A paroxysm.
Peel the skin, scratch the inside of an apple
Search the word, burn it and inhale in
your surreal peace, preen the mirth
And swallow the liquidity, join your body
With its formation, a constellation of stars
Then, you shall know insatiable hunger.
intensive words
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0nce again thank you for your read!
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welcome dear cool pic ๐
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Thanks.
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once again welcome
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This is POWERFUL! Do you believe such a hunger would be a curse or an asset that will keep one motivated?
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I don’t think there is any such reason why it will be a curse? Definitely an asset, the more we think about it the more flawless we become in word hunt.
Hope you liked the answer.:)
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Search the word, burn it and inhale in
your surreal peace, preen the mirth
And swallow the liquidity, join your body
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I can see the deep thinking .
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Thank you so much!
I feel the connotation is true when it comes to the word hunt.
I appreciate your feedback.
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๐๐ dedication level
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I quite love the conciseness of the poem. And I absolutely adore the picture up at the top. My personal favorite line is “A healing iris. A gargantuan of flowing words. A paroxysm.” I don’t think I can adequately describe the reason why I enjoy it so much; it’s more than well stated…it simply resonated with me. Thank you for sharing!
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Its such a thrilling feeling when someone like you can relate to my words in depth. I am thankful to you for this and glad you loved those lines. They are my favourite too!
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you are welcome!!
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That’s the first time I remember reading a poem about actively looking for a hunger that can’t be satisfied. I’m so used to thinking about trying to get away from hunger to have a more peaceful soul, in a Zen Buddhist sort of way, that your poem was enlightening in the opposite direction.
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Very intense word choice, and I love the image!
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Finally, the image is noticed!
Thank You so much. Much appreciated.
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Yes, insatiable hunger is like a prison, be it a glass jar or confined behind a grilled window. The flow of this piece helps the reader feel the madness.
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Thank You for knowing the insatiable hunger I talked about.
You know it best!
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You are most welcome, MVS!
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Wait..
Lemme find my dictionary… ๐ฌ๐ฌ
As always.. You’re the best ๐๐
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Those are deep powerful words. โบ
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Thanks sweet friend!:)
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Pleasure always. โบ
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Wonderful Devika. Insatiability well imaged. ๐
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