The tropical mind you loved,
the charm of my heart you carried
shall be in the oblivion sky someday,
lost like scattered clouds,
The naivety of my soul,
the pureness of my childlike laughter
shall be hidden in the dark musty rocks,
so deep and exceptional;
that it will become untraceable
to find the original carvings
of my caricature.
Published by
my valiant soul
A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times.
Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied.
My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others.
Curator of Olive Skins.
View all posts by my valiant soul
I love this π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Hi there!
Thank you for your kind words.
I am glad you liked this.:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
Yes great one, what if someone finds it or trace it?
LikeLiked by 1 person
Then it would be a shattered mind I guess.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Oh k. Peace. Keep inspiring.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
My pleasure valiant.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is beautiful. Stunning metaphors and description – so much so I cannot choose favorite lines because they are all gorgeous.
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is my really old work.
I have evolved in my writings and I feel great to see that.
I am still honoured if you liked this piece as well.
Much appreciated!
LikeLiked by 2 people
You are most welcome. i find that a person’s truest essence can be found in their early writing. I am a huge fan of your work.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I might have shed a tear or two reading your lovely comment.
Thank you so much for the immense honour.
Btw am I speaking to a male or female?
LikeLiked by 2 people
Aw, when one poet touches another it is most profound. You are welcome and you are speaking to a male.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you for your read and it’s nice to know whom am I talking to.
Have a good day!
LikeLiked by 2 people
You are most welcome, MVS. My day is great, thank you, and I hope you are enjoying yours, too π
LikeLiked by 1 person
You really have a knack for ending your poems exceptionally well. I am a sucker for intense and poignant endings.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks tre!
Ending should be poignant and deep which you get brilliantly.:)
LikeLiked by 2 people
You’re most welcome. Thank you. π
LikeLiked by 1 person
This is beautifulβ¦.the metaphors are really excellent..
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you so much!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Nice poem!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you, kindly!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Your welcome fellow poet
LikeLike
This is beautifulβ¦.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thankyou, kindly!
LikeLike
Simply beautiful…I always enjoy reading your posts and always anticipate the next oneπβ€
LikeLiked by 1 person
Wonderful lines! Especially the last one is exceptionally mesmerising!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thank you dear V!
I was surfing through your blog and did not find any new piece.
Hopy you write soon.:)
LikeLike
You are welcome! Devika, I’m out on a holiday for a week.. taking some time out! I will be back soonππ
LikeLiked by 1 person
Great stuff! Very well written. You’ve got my follow. Check out my comedy blog and give it a follow if you like it!
LikeLike
Woww!! Simply in awe of your way with words!!!
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thnk you so much PD!:)
LikeLiked by 1 person
All my pleasure π
LikeLiked by 1 person
Very nice, flows brilliantly!
LikeLiked by 1 person
I am so honoured to have your feedback.
Much thanks, Mark.
LikeLike
You’re most welcome, lovely piece.
LikeLiked by 1 person