poetry

Untraceable

Related image

The tropical mind you loved,

the charm of my heart you carried

shall be in the oblivion sky someday,

lost like scattered clouds,

The naivety of my soul,

the pureness of my childlike laughter

shall be hidden in the dark musty rocks,

so deep and exceptional;

that it will become untraceable

to find the original carvings

of my caricature.



 

35 thoughts on “Untraceable

  1. This is beautiful. Stunning metaphors and description – so much so I cannot choose favorite lines because they are all gorgeous.

    Liked by 1 person

      1. You are most welcome. i find that a person’s truest essence can be found in their early writing. I am a huge fan of your work.

        Liked by 1 person

Leave a Reply

Please log in using one of these methods to post your comment:

WordPress.com Logo

You are commenting using your WordPress.com account. Log Out /  Change )

Google photo

You are commenting using your Google account. Log Out /  Change )

Twitter picture

You are commenting using your Twitter account. Log Out /  Change )

Facebook photo

You are commenting using your Facebook account. Log Out /  Change )

Connecting to %s