My rapacious soul is satisfied,
The ultimate feckless night is perspicacious now!
The outlandish thought once peevish, are palpable through a bright rainbow now,
My lassitude aura has vanished,
The intricate flustered breath is frisky now.
The embellished intentions once connive are beaming through my eyes now!
I am an ebullient puerile soul now,
Undisturbed by the worldly flaky eyes.
I have built my own roads..which leads to a genial place,
Unconcerned about the judgemental minds…
I am breathing once again now!
A beautiful sentiment and lesson for one and all – make your own roads towards a more genial place while ignoring the judgmental. Well-done, MVS.
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Yes, exactly Alex!
Thank you for dropping by to read my poem.
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My pleasure, MVS.
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Good to read this for… Keep smiling, as always.
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Thank you. Means a lot.
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Nice poem!
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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Wow lovely
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Thank you for your uplifting words.
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Welcome dear
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Knowing all the work through your
writing that it took to get here,
seeing you are happy
makes me happy.
You have become the hub
of the wheel of your own life Devika.
With clarity you become the hub.
You can go or do anything you want
in life.
The choice is yours.
you are the hub
to which all the spokes connect
to which the wheel spins around
your position never changes
the wheel revolves around you
the cart moves forward
and can go anywhere
you are the hub
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Life is never easy for anyone. Amidst all the chaos, I try to breathe and survive harsh truths. At times I may fail and at times I survive. That’s a lesson we all face and experience as it brushes our capabilities further.
I am happy that you like my this positive poem for now Forrest.
So much gratitude!
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You are right Devika…life is not easy of anyone.
I appreciate both you and your poetry and what I have gained from it.
Many of your pieces make me reflect and remind me
or better put “re-recognize” the things that truly important in life.
I thank you for this gift.
Have a nice evening.
Forrest
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This piece portrays the basic human needs so beautifully. Very inspiring. Thank you for writing this.
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Hi there!
Thank you so much for a positive feedback. Glad you found it inspiring.
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I’m going through your blog and notice you have an amazing vocabulary. Everything you write flows, has fabric (feel), has great imagery. Because you have great vocabulary it would be interesting to see something different than poetry.
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That means a lot.
I write poetry mainly and I am working currently on my novel.
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Welcome – I saw your book of poetry on Amazon. Well that’s awesome!
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That’s great!
Thank you.
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