Under the clear skies with pearls of white words,
I knit my word into my emotion, repeat the process
brush, brush, and blink, blink.
Taking the ecstasy onto my teeth, I feel the caress of my saddest lines,
put it on my fragile white shoulder,
then cut my words and swallow the ink,
this is how I started Poetry.
With a blank space between my fingers,
with a crooked faith,
my breast was swollen with fire, the unflinching desire
thumping my murky pen, producing a river of composed mind,
producing the glitters of fairy dust
this is how I started Poetry.
the perfect summary of the writing experience. Truly a joy to read.
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It was so good.
Can you check my blog too cause i just started writing poems:
http://www.shandalblog.wordpress.com
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This is amazing and so powerful. I just wrote my first blog poem about childhood games. Would love you to check it out if ever you have time http://wp.me/p93E9G-cr . If not, please keep writing!
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Thanks for the read!
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Very beautiful way of writing ….we have also started a poem blog …do visit my blog n follow us we will feel glad !!
https://bleedingthoughtsweb.wordpress.com
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The imagery here is absolutely incredible
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Thank you so much.
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Reluctantly. That is how I started my poetry.
I like the way you artistically mix metaphors in this poem.
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Thankyou for your words.
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Your work is wonderful xxx truly wonderful xxx
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You are amazing dear!
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Love this,,,every words speak to my heart…
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Means a lot.
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Reblogged this on Roger Bussey.
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Yep, sounds about right. Congratulations on the journey.
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Beautiful!
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Great poem! I posted a poem today too, would love for you to check it out if you get a chance 🙂
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This is great! I love the passion between the lines!
I am currently hosting a poetry contest and would love to see a submission from you! Check it out if you’d like, no entry fee but there are prizes 👍🏻
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Excellent!
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Thanks.
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amazed by the choice of words….loved it a lot…
i have tried a poetry…please provide me your review on it
https://bleedingthoughtsweb.com/2017/10/29/the-eternal-love/
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Wonderfully expressed!
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Thankyou.
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Oh my I love this!!!
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Found something I can totally relate to. Gorgeous! 🙂
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So happy you did!.
Thankyou.
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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This is hot!
Kudos..
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Beautiful poem🌸🌸
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Thankyou for your kind words.
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Your welcome 😘
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I love the fluidity and movement of the poem! Well done!
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So much thanks to you for stopping by!
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amazing ❤
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Thankyou.
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This is absolutely amazing
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Thankyou.
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i love this poem….poetry is food to the soul… check out my blog pls… it’s all about poetry
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Sure I will.
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This is great. Very artistic and keeps pulling you into the idea of self expression through poetic creations
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Thankyou so much.
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A wonderful poem for poets. Thank you.
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Beautiful…
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Thanks.
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Amazing – simply outstanding
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Thank you!!
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Mind blowing !! I am enthralled.. speechless..
Works like these inspire budding poets..
I have written a few myself. Please do have a read and help me with your valued feedbacks. 😀
Keep it up! 😀
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Thank you so much Paarth.
I will surely read your work.
All the best!
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wow this is beautiful
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I am so thankful to you for giving your valuable time to my work.
Much appreciated my friend!
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