Wild

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trivial issues get reverence, 

vital people ignored

the state of mind has lost its intoxication,

oh! I miss being the wild one around.



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my valiant soul

A dreamer and a believer for the upliftment of women rights. A published poet, author, writer. Believes in dancing and cooking amazing food for hungry souls at times. Loves to write and write till the moon is satisfied. My writings can be found at Visual Verse, Indian Periodical, Sick Lit mag, Duane's Poetree, Thistle magazine, among various others. Curator of Olive Skins.

30 thoughts on “Wild”

  1. Hi. You’re not a full stop. We are nothing but words that chain up but never clasp. An epic journey of words that matter and don’t matter, an epitome of love a human can hold in his or her heart. A beautiful laughter that can touch souls. A cry that can set everything right. A smile that can make others smile. We’re a ever flowing waterfall that keeps falling with the ferocity of Niagara. Perhaps, I shouldn’t be comparing us with Niagara at all. Cause, we are nothing but infinite, incomparable and undefeatable. Have a grip lady. You’re more than a complete sentence. But when they say, all that begins has to end, I guess they’ve forgotten that this universe has been there since a very very long time and so will be our life even if it is limited by the aspect of death. But, who knows what happens to the souls that leave. Don’t they continue to flourish?

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    1. Omg! You are such a darling.I wrote that and immediately deleted it thinking(don’t know what).But once again, I am relieved to know that I just need to hang in there.You know sometimes these moments just feel like killing us.
      You were so thoughtful to actually inspire me enough.
      Thanks, love.

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      1. I just wanted you to know that you’re not alone in this journey. There are times when we think ourselves to have lost that charm and there are days when everything appears falling and failing. But, then the next day begins with the beautiful sunrise and those dark thoughts vanish and even if they don’t they are hazed enough by the sun shining bright. Take one day at a time. No one will judge you, you are answerable only to God and yourself. Keep your conscience clear, that should suffice.

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      2. That’s so true.I need to give it a break, things that have been keeping me off lately. I really wish that after I am fone with these cloudu days I get to see the brightest of the sun.
        Thank you so much for resonating with my emotion.
        I really appreciate that.:)

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  2. Full Stop: Don’t hesitate to take a break when you need one.
    Let’s you think, collect your thoughts, and gain perspective.
    And then you can come back with the renewed energy and the positive focus
    that feels right to you.
    Have a nice evening Devika.
    Forrest

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      1. Hey it might be happening because of akismet plugin, valiant write to support@akismet.com(kind of bash them) or use help to chat to customers (don’t be so polite), it happen to me few days ago I totally wrecked them. (tell them your site got deleted too)

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  3. My dear, sweet poet. You are certainly wild and beyond. Just look at your poetry. I know this was written a while back but I am searching out pieces of yours I’ve not commented on. I read your poetry over and over, frequently. What you say in this piece is true: too much time is spent applauding the trivial and the important people, thoughts, ideas, go on ignored. People want accolades for writing or doing nothing with any substance. Oh, and your words, are pure alcohol for he mind, always leaving me drunk and stumbling away. I think I might have told you this once, but I LOVE your poetry and I have such a deep admiration for you, the poet 🙂 🙂

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    1. I am glad you read my this work too.
      Nothing thrills ne more to hear such encouraging words from you kind writer.
      It is my honour that you read my poetry over and over just to seek satisfaction out of it and that really makes me happy.
      You are one kind soul to leave such motivating words always about my work.
      I am myself fond of your writings and shall always be.
      Thankyou so much for this!

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      1. You are most welcome, Devika. I just want to make sure I read all your work. I don’t want to miss a single poem. Peace, love and respect, my friend.

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